This is a prequel to Abandoned by Disney
Suggestion: We could use another person at check-in during peak hours.
Suggestion: Please move the hot dog cart away from the main water slide. Also please have water slide staff keep an eye out for children who just ate. When anyone gets sick in there, three or four people have to go through it before we know about it.
Suggestion: It would be nice if we had a way to give more detailed information anonymously. Maybe private meeting time with management?
Suggestion: Need more security at south gate.
Suggestion: Music in the reptile house keeps slowing down or reversing, it’s VERY annoying.
Suggestion: Please tell the mascots not to try eating in their costumes. We keep getting one in with food all over its face and we think someone’s trying to be funny. The mouth opening is mesh, so eating isn’t even possible.
Suggestion: Please fix the music in the reptile house, it’s still driving me up the wall.
Suggestion: Guests are complaining about the amount of towels in their rooms.
Suggestion: Need a better or newer coffee machine for the break room.
Suggestion: I wasn’t going to say anything because I’m pretty tolerant, but please stop admitting children without faces. They won’t stay in the guest areas.
Suggestion: The common area could use a bigger selection of DVDs and games. The collection is already getting stale.
Suggestion: Still need security at south gate. What’s cheaper, having a staffer pass by once in a while, or painting over all the vandalism?
Suggestion: South gate needs more security.
Suggestion: What are we doing about the profanities at the employee exit? Send security there more times of the day, or whatever.
Suggestion: Don’t feel safe leaving south gate at end of shift.
Suggestion: Frank is cheating at solitaire when he thinks I’m not watching. Please do something about this immediately.
Suggestion: Tell the mascots to stay out of where they don’t belong. One of them keeps turning off music in the reptile house. Can’t tell who because of the suit. Have a meeting or something.
Suggestion: Please give the Mascots more break time or allow them to take short breathers during work hours. Sweat and body odor are one thing, but now we keep getting the same suit full of vomit.
Suggestion: Stop Frank, he’s a menace. It has now spread to Sudoku. I am not making this up.
Suggestion: Sorry to write on a napkin, but we need more suggestion cards or else somebody is stealing them all.
Suggestion: Stop the fucking music.
Suggestion: I swear, all these blank kids are getting into everything. Every time I kill one of them the others just misbehave more. I keep finding them in piles at the bottom of stairways and they think its funny. It’s not funny. I can’t get through.
Suggestion: We need more suggestion cards.
Suggestion: We received a mascot suit with paint on its gloves. Someone took it to the south gate, and the color matches what the vandal is using. Might be worth looking into. Also, where are the cards?
Suggestion: costume sticking to the sores
Suggestion: It’ s tOo hard to writ with this gloves on
Suggestion: Thanks for the suggestion cards! Finally! What are we doing about staffing check-in at peak hours?
Suggestion: Once more, sorry for the napkin. We’re out of cards again.
Suggestion: One of the mascots cornered me in the supply closet and grabbed my breasts. I’ve told Michael Sheehan about it but I don’t think he’s going to do anything because I don’t know who was in the outfit. I’m going to file a lawsuit if management continues to avoid my calls. This is a final notice. Additionally, please restock the cards. I suspect they were removed so you could discourage my reports.
Suggestion: ha ha I’m a mouse
Suggestion: FUCK YOU.
Suggestion: Someone’s taking out light bulbs. I mean, just everywhere. The guests are getting increasingly angry about flipping switches only to have nothing happen.
Suggestion: When are we getting some new DVDs in the common room? I’m not complaining because they’re old movies, just that plenty are scratched and don’t play all the way through.
Suggestion: What’s the ETA on that coffee maker?
Suggestion: The vending machines on the third floor in the guest area are constantly unplugged and the money slots are often jammed with suggestion cards. I don’t even know what these cards are talking about.
Suggestion: We need more cards again.
Suggestion: Try to find Frank.
Suggestion: I will give you clues about Frank, okay?
Suggestion: Clue #1, It’s cold.
Suggestion: Clue #2, It’s wet.
Suggestion: We need another coat of paint on the south gate. Are you doing anything about this clown?
Suggestion: Clue #3, Flush.
Suggestion: The hot dog cart is still next to the water slide and there have been two more incidents involving children getting sick halfway through the pipe. This is really reflecting poorly on the resort.
Suggestion: I don’t think you’re lookng for frank!!
Suggestion: Hey, I don’t want to be dick, but seriously, where are the cards? This box is pointless.
Suggestion: I keep sinking into the floor or
Suggestion: maybe it’s just that I feel like it.
Suggestion: I can’t get any rest because there’s too much to do. Every time I lie down guests keep asking if I’m okay.
Suggestion: i can’t get my head off i can’t get my head off i cant get my head off i cant get my hed off i can’t get my head of
Suggestion: ignore last card it was my real head i forgot
Suggestion: the costume is sticking to my sores and there are more sores
Suggestion: all i am is sores
Suggestion: the costume is breathing and if i don’t match its movements i can’t get any air
Suggestion: i keep locking the gates but someone keeps opening them again please tell them to stop doing that because it lets everyone out again and i feel that’s counter productive
Suggestion: they found frank and they’re going to blame me please advise
Suggestion: HAHAHAHA franks face was like a bad looking plate of mashed potatoes when they pulled him out but when i laughed at it everyone looked at me even the people with faces which is odd
Suggestion: i have to think of what to do
Suggestion: i know hang on
Suggestion: I’m not sure if the suggestion box is the right place for this, but security isn’t doing much about my complaint. Over the last couple days I’ve been circling the resort and counting the number of staffers. As far as I can tell, there are more mascots on the grounds than we have on payroll. Security says it doesn’t make sense, but I think we have one extra.
Suggestion: please help, costumes are heavy with people inside and there’s no hook left for me
29 Comments on 'A Few Suggestions'
Hey I reviewed this. It was good but needs work, but good job.
very good and original, it took me some time o figure out what the story was based on tho
Eh, It’s really hard to understand at first。Like I don’t get all that is happening and it takes time to see what they are trying to say in the story but other than that, good job。
adding one more thing, you should do a remake, its really hard to understand to people that don’t know much english grammar so。 just telling you this so you could get better at doing pastas ^^。
I know it’s serious and lays foundations for the Disney trilogy, but I laughed at this.
I normally don’t like added parts to stories, but this just made Abandoned By Disney even greater. Xx
i really liked ‘Abandoned by Disney’, and i really enjoyed this too. i like how there were very direct and memorable correlations from one to the other. i read the first story two weeks ago and it was creepy (to me) and reading this brought the whole story back to me. good job with the continuity, and for the lovely making of banal and mundane suggestion box into a captain’s log of the subtle chaos. 8/10.
Just to let everyone who’s criticizing wether it be constructive or destructive, this isn’t my work. I’m an awful writer. This is the creation of Slimebeast. He used to write creepypastas, but he dislikes the genre because it’s hard to claim work as your own. It’s exactly what he wishes to avoid when you accredit me with his merits.
This was very confusing to me personally. I am not sure if maybe this is before Disney had been abandoned, or what the deal is here. Didn’t find it the least bit creepy, paranormal etc. But rather I found myself trying to reread this to try and figure out the point of this story. Maybe I need to reread Abandoned by Disney a third time, or I could just be completely oblivious to the intention of this story. Did however portray a great example of poor management.
This is good even for me and if you have seen any of my other comments I don’t go easy on the rate ill give it a 4/5.
Events coincide well with Abandoned by Disney.
The portrayal of the place is good but the story is still slightly boring.
it was alright i didnt like it that much though
This was tasty
Very well written, read abandoned by disney before I read this so was a bit confused but now understand it, good pasta 4/5
This is very boring and tbh this is my opinion i don’t want to read anything like this again. I give this a 0/10.
Love this pasta every time I see it. Thanks.
There’s a lot of disliked comments on this page.
Um… I’m probably just an idiot but what does the last suggestion mean? “Please help. The costumes are heavy with people inside and there’s no hook left for me”. Does that mean that it’s the ‘wanna see me take off my head?’ Micky writing it and he put dead people in the costumes but now there’s no costume hooks left to hang on? And what do “children without faces” mean, AND WHAT HAPPENED TO FRANK LIKE WTF WHY AM I SO DUMB I DON’T KNOW WHAT HALF THE SUGGESTIONS ARE IMPLYING!! SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN!!!!!!!
After reading this 5 times I still don’t get it :v
Amazing story I didn’t understand at first but as I was reading I want to read more and more by the way amazing job on the story bye
Me no understand
LOVED IT! Was kinda surprised when I read all the comments from people saying they didn’t understand it.. Idk if they haven’t read abandoned by Disney (which it clearly states it a continuation of) or if they just couldn’t understand which suggestions were from works vs haunted Mickey. Either way, I thought it was super creepy and really great!
I’m baffled as to why so many people found this story so hard to understand. I thought it was hilarious. Fun story and format.
I went to disney world once… It was awful.
I think they got rid of the small world ride… Many, many years ago… My family still did the whole “family vacwtion to disney thing… My sister is 6 years younger than me ergo the trip was mostly for her… I hate disney movies… All of them. I digress. I was 18, she was 12. (Note: We have always hated each other. Eventualy, I disowned my whole family.) I was on certain strong hallucinagens the whole time. This story is only a piece of what I remember. If I believed in god I would say disney was down with the devil…
Awesome and freaky. Love it and abandoned by Disney. Always thought Disney was freaky. This just makes me believe it more creepypasta or not. 10/10
This reminds me of fnaf SO COOL!!
i dident get what some of the suggestions meant but overall nice story