You awaken from a hazy dreamless sleep. You hear laughter, deep and booming, as if the source of it is amused. You look to your left at your alarm clock on your nightstand.
6:04
In red digitized numbers.
The laughter is growing louder now, and is beginning to hurt your ear drums. Wanting nothing other then to be free of this annoying ringing laughter, you throw on some clothing and rush towards your bedroom door. At first it appears as a little white square but as you approach the door, you notice a piece of paper has been nailed to the door. the paper appears to have been quickly and ungracefully ripped from a book. Hesitantly you rip the paper free of the nail suspending it to the door. On the paper in shaky scrawling writing, seemingly from a pen.
“604
DOOR TO FOREVER
INFINITY AWAITS”
Dismissively dropping the paper on the floor, you open your bedroom door and take one step forward before realizing that there is nothing before you but blackness. Darker than the darkest night you have ever seen, it seems almost swallowing, but before you have time to think about that, you feel a sickening wrenching feeling in your stomach, and the lights go out.
You awaken, and the first thing you think about is what a crazy dream you just had, but the thought is cut short by deep booming laughter that rings your eardrums. You look to your left at your alarm clock on your nightstand.
6:05
In red digitized numbers.
On your bedroom door is a note that says:
“605
DOOR TO FOREVER
INFINITY AWAITS”
The laughter echoes in your head.
24 Comments on 'Door to Forever'
Ooooh I get it. It goes on forever. Well done man, I got chills OnO
lol..he will have the same dream over and over again and he/she has already had the “dream” 605 times..lol
so awesome i love it
Wouldn’t the door be gone at 404
I didn’t really enjoy this because of the you perspective. I like the idea even though it’s been done with different stories. Nice try though. Next time try to stray from using the reader as the person in the story.
Beautifully done!
Beautifully done! Though, i feel that such terms as “door” and “paper” were a bit repetitive. My favorite MiniPasta thus far!
This one mAde me smile because of how eerie it is. Great job. This story describes what I think Hell might be like if it exists.
loved it scared me tho
it was pretty neat. I like this one!
It was so simply scary. Nice pasta.
IT WAS NICE
The endless existence, very well done.
Awesome…scary but awesome…
I get the infinity part, but the laughing seems out of place to me.
good shit good shit.
Good job broman. Ya done good. Is anyone else reminded of that door in Full metal alchemist called the gate?
I shit bricks…for real.
best story I have read in a long time the thought of being trapped in time terrifies me
short but oh-so tasty, well done
Nice pasta! Needs a bit of backstory though…
This was spooky! I enjoyed the sloppiness of the door and how each minute has its own door.And the infinity of it all.
just don’t wake up in 6;04 or disturbing laughter.
Nice but I did kinda sorta didn’t get and then read some of the comments and then I was like oh that’s how it’s is it goes on for ever