Door to Forever

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You awaken from a hazy dreamless sleep. You hear laughter, deep and booming, as if the source of it is amused. You look to your left at your alarm clock on your nightstand.

6:04

In red digitized numbers.

The laughter is growing louder now, and is beginning to hurt your ear drums. Wanting nothing other then to be free of this annoying ringing laughter, you throw on some clothing and rush towards your bedroom door. At first it appears as a little white square but as you approach the door, you notice a piece of paper has been nailed to the door. the paper appears to have been quickly and ungracefully ripped from a book. Hesitantly you rip the paper free of the nail suspending it to the door. On the paper in shaky scrawling writing, seemingly from a pen.

“604
DOOR TO FOREVER
INFINITY AWAITS”

Dismissively dropping the paper on the floor, you open your bedroom door and take one step forward before realizing that there is nothing before you but blackness. Darker than the darkest night you have ever seen, it seems almost swallowing, but before you have time to think about that, you feel a sickening wrenching feeling in your stomach, and the lights go out.

You awaken, and the first thing you think about is what a crazy dream you just had, but the thought is cut short by deep booming laughter that rings your eardrums. You look to your left at your alarm clock on your nightstand.

6:05

In red digitized numbers.

On your bedroom door is a note that says:

“605
DOOR TO FOREVER
INFINITY AWAITS”

The laughter echoes in your head.

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  • Commented on March 27, 2015 at 3:00 pm

    Wouldn’t the door be gone at 404

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  • Commented on December 23, 2014 at 3:44 pm

    Ooooh I get it. It goes on forever. Well done man, I got chills OnO

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  • Commented on January 29, 2015 at 5:01 pm

    lol..he will have the same dream over and over again and he/she has already had the “dream” 605 times..lol

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  • Commented on April 20, 2015 at 12:35 am

    I didn’t really enjoy this because of the you perspective. I like the idea even though it’s been done with different stories. Nice try though. Next time try to stray from using the reader as the person in the story.

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  • Commented on July 27, 2015 at 10:09 pm

    This one mAde me smile because of how eerie it is. Great job. This story describes what I think Hell might be like if it exists.

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  • Commented on February 25, 2015 at 2:32 pm

    so awesome i love it

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  • Commented on September 24, 2015 at 8:59 am

    The endless existence, very well done.

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  • Commented on August 4, 2015 at 4:49 am

    loved it scared me tho

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  • Commented on September 4, 2015 at 2:51 pm

    it was pretty neat. I like this one!

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  • Commented on December 24, 2015 at 2:49 am

    Awesome…scary but awesome…

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  • Commented on June 27, 2015 at 6:16 am

    Beautifully done!

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  • Grr
    Commented on September 11, 2015 at 12:34 am

    It was so simply scary. Nice pasta.

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  • Commented on September 11, 2015 at 4:35 pm

    IT WAS NICE

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  • Commented on January 7, 2016 at 12:35 am

    I get the infinity part, but the laughing seems out of place to me.

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  • Commented on October 18, 2016 at 5:25 pm

    I shit bricks…for real.

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  • Commented on January 31, 2016 at 6:56 am

    good shit good shit.

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  • Commented on May 10, 2016 at 2:47 am

    Good job broman. Ya done good. Is anyone else reminded of that door in Full metal alchemist called the gate?

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  • Commented on October 29, 2016 at 3:13 pm

    best story I have read in a long time the thought of being trapped in time terrifies me

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  • Commented on November 24, 2016 at 12:12 am

    short but oh-so tasty, well done

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  • Commented on December 1, 2016 at 8:37 pm

    Nice pasta! Needs a bit of backstory though…

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  • Commented on June 27, 2015 at 6:20 am

    Beautifully done! Though, i feel that such terms as “door” and “paper” were a bit repetitive. My favorite MiniPasta thus far!

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