Eyes

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Do you know about the monster under your bed? How it wasn’t there when someone would look for it? Or was your monster behind the curtain, suddenly gone when you asked someone to check behind it? Some of them used to hide in the closet and like all of these monsters, were gone when someone else tried to find them.

Now all of them are gone. No more monsters under your bed, behind your curtain or in the closet. Now you are the one who looks for them, trying to find them on the internet, thinking they have forgotten about you. That’s not true you know. All they used to do was figure out your nightmares. What did you used to be scared of? As soon as your monster found the answer, it would strengthen your fear before disappearing. Your strongest fear, do you remember it? The irrational fear you couldn’t explain to anyone else. It is all around you, you know. No matter what you fear, in every direction you run you will find it. Back to the monster, forget your fear.
The monster still exists. Only now it is time for the next step. It needs to settle in your head.

The easiest way to do that is through your eyes. Eyes are the windows to the mind and soul. Every respectable monster knows how to climb through a window, especially open windows, like your eyes are open now. Focusing on this screen, your eyes have been open for a while. You wanted to let the story seep in, but maybe other things have come in as well. Do you feel like something might have been staring back? Something… sinister? I’m not saying it happened, but the next time you see something you are afraid of, remember there is a lot about your brain you don’t know. Maybe in there is a monster feeding on your fear, waiting to become big enough to consume you. Thank you for opening your eyes for me, thank you for opening those beautiful windows to your soul for me.

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  • Commented on May 15, 2017 at 9:07 am

    lost my mind have no soul can’t see into what you don’t have

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  • Commented on March 24, 2015 at 2:37 pm

    OH HELL NO!

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 1:05 pm

    NO!!

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  • Joseph
    Commented on May 27, 2015 at 5:40 pm

    Wow I didn’t want to sleep tonight anyway

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  • OminiousMe
    Commented on January 15, 2015 at 2:03 am

    omg!!! no!!

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  • anonymous girl
    Commented on February 17, 2015 at 5:55 pm

    That gave me goosebumps…

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  • Commented on February 19, 2015 at 9:06 pm

    No this can’t be *shiveres* I didn’t just give you all my secrets *gulps* to…… My……. Soul did I?

    THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW

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  • Commented on June 19, 2015 at 10:04 pm

    Hahaha, that’s a good pasta! 10/10 breads.

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  • Commented on December 19, 2015 at 3:22 am

    I used to be scared of Chucky when I was little… you just reminded me, how dare you.

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  • Commented on February 23, 2016 at 1:25 am

    Good pasta. I didn’t feel like sleeping anyway… It could have been a bit more surprising, but I love the idea 8/10

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  • Jeff/Keaganmeyer
    Commented on April 19, 2016 at 6:22 pm

    I like how it reminded me I have a game on pause. 10/10. Good work on this one.

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  • Commented on April 19, 2016 at 10:52 pm

    well shit

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  • Commented on November 13, 2015 at 10:38 pm

    could be better

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  • Commented on October 18, 2016 at 5:29 pm

    SHIT! HELL NO!

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  • Commented on February 1, 2016 at 6:10 pm

    That was creepy lol

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  • chibicanada
    Commented on May 4, 2016 at 5:22 pm

    I have no soul

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  • Commented on December 13, 2016 at 7:40 pm

    For your misfortune…I have no fears
    I barely have feelings so…

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  • Commented on February 15, 2017 at 2:15 pm

    oh shit, well we all know who’s fucked

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  • Commented on February 18, 2017 at 7:03 pm

    Nice job u really played with my head

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  • Commented on May 5, 2017 at 12:48 pm

    O.M.F.G!!!!!!!!!!u just brought back my fear

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  • Commented on May 5, 2017 at 3:24 pm

    u got my fuckin’ skin crawling!!!!

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  • Commented on May 15, 2017 at 3:14 am

    I love this story!

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  • Commented on July 22, 2017 at 12:53 am

    Woah, super freaky XD
    4/5

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  • Commented on September 5, 2017 at 7:53 am

    Freaky and awesomely cool. Kinda like the Weeping Angels in Dr Who in the episode where one was living in eye of Rose. Brilliantly short but awesomely cool !!! 10/10!!!!

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 4:18 pm

    Not the best, pretty lame. Try again.

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  • Commented on January 16, 2017 at 7:53 pm

    This was dlishouse i cant wait for the monster to get me oh how fun that will be

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  • Commented on November 24, 2015 at 9:12 am

    “Question? Question, question, question, question?”
    Uh, not really.
    I didn’t feel anything staring back (the story didn’t make me). There was no sinister feeling. I didn’t feel a hint bit scared so no monster got the chance to crawl in through my eyes. Weird. I have my suspected supernatural monsters but this story actually gave me a moment to not be scared of them.

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  • Maren Riedemann
    Commented on September 17, 2015 at 4:29 pm

    Not scared so lame and stupid and dumb!!!!!!!!!!!!

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