Why do you do it? You don’t know why, but you do. You make sure the windows are locked, you check the other side of the door, and your closet…You even check under your bed. Why do you do this? Does ripping open the shower curtain and seeing nothing there make you feel safe? Does scoping the area with your eyes after reading a scary story reassure you?
Well, it shouldn’t.
Because by the time you’ve looked, I’ve already hidden.
49 Comments on 'Hidden'
0_0 …. nice one…..
Short yet mind-blowingly creepy. Love pastas like this.
all too familiar. -sion-
Nice. Reminds me of another pasta that describes a person that entered your room as you were reading the pasta.
LOVE this
Oooooh this was tooo good!!!!! It’s morning and I still got spooked awesome!! Keep writing!
Not like I was planning on sleeping tonight anyways… 0.0
Please excuse me while I hide under the covers.
These pastas are the best kind, the ones you can relate to. I constantly check behind the shower curtain to see if there’s somebody there. If only I knew why!
Schweeet =P
And I just checked my room and turned off the lights… I guess one night without sleep won’t hurt.
O_o Dammit, it was that night with good sleep! Nice pasta 🙂
It’s not like sleep is healthy or anything
Simple but effective 3/5
For me, the way this was written made the character seem sweet. I tried rereading and it was still the same. I like this. Having something like this once is nice.
I always liked playing hide ‘n seek…
To find this scary enough to you you will first have to get spooked up by reading Creepypastas hen when you are scared you should read this. xD
awesome this pasta is the kind that you can both relate to and be creeped out about love it 😀
Not creepy.
◉_◉ That is a little creepy. A being that one can never see, like an imaginary friend. No one sees it, no one hears it, no one knows who or what it is.
And if they’re not there to kill you, I’ll be there…..
Good piece of work I like it keep up the good work
Its always a challenge to keep a pasta creepy and short, a challenge I love to see accepted and completed. Well done.
I laugh, because I’ve seen you as you hide, I just have the courtesy to not bother you.
Nice story! 4/5
This seemed more creepy to me than it should be since my house is very old and the rooms are dark most of the time. 9/10
Short but well written and effectively creepy.Great pasta
I do this all the time and it always creeps me out more and more, AND THIS STORY DID NOT HELP
Amazing. I just looked around even though it said not to and my subconsious was like, “idiot!”
original and short but not very creepy or long
Very tasty pasta.
I like it! 🙂
Great Job! 😀
5/5
Well, I wasn’t planning on sleeping tonight anyway.
Haha brilliant!
I don’t need sleep anyway
Short done right
Too slow to look. They’ve already hidden.
O)_(O
makes me think if that is what the shadows i see are. amazing.
This is the first Tiny story I’ve read on Creepypasta, very good considering it’s creepy and only a paragraph.
Too short
I always love short pastas that explain a scenario that you are very familiar with that involves being creeped out by something specific like a fear or a monster and it’s just the narrator talking about that specific thing but it ends with the narrator telling that they are that specific thing.
Short and sweet
Well, it’s not bad but it’s too short to be creepy
Short but relatable. The doggo approves.
ooooookkkkkkkaaaaayyyyyyy…..I always wondered what was in my attic anyway
Love ❤️ it!!!;)
Who needs sleep, amiright?
8/10
It’s not like I actually like to sleep at night nope nope nope I like staying awake praying to God to have mercy on my soul.
Sleep is for the weak ;-; plz help meh
Hot diggity that was creepy and I did not like it! Haha. I do ALL of those things (especially the shower curtain!) I do not want to think there is something there just hidden!! Very well done. I can relate it to and that’s scary