Hidden

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Why do you do it? You don’t know why, but you do. You make sure the windows are locked, you check the other side of the door, and your closet…You even check under your bed. Why do you do this? Does ripping open the shower curtain and seeing nothing there make you feel safe? Does scoping the area with your eyes after reading a scary story reassure you?

Well, it shouldn’t.

Because by the time you’ve looked, I’ve already hidden.

Original Author: Idiotequette

34 Comments on 'Hidden'

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  • Commented on March 29, 2014 at 12:01 am

    It’s not like sleep is healthy or anything

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  • Commented on October 16, 2013 at 10:39 am

    These pastas are the best kind, the ones you can relate to. I constantly check behind the shower curtain to see if there’s somebody there. If only I knew why!

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  • Commented on June 17, 2013 at 2:51 pm

    Nice. Reminds me of another pasta that describes a person that entered your room as you were reading the pasta.

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  • Commented on May 8, 2013 at 2:44 pm

    Short yet mind-blowingly creepy. Love pastas like this.

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  • Commented on September 3, 2013 at 4:23 pm

    Oooooh this was tooo good!!!!! It’s morning and I still got spooked awesome!! Keep writing!

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  • Commented on October 16, 2013 at 2:31 am

    Please excuse me while I hide under the covers.

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  • Commented on February 2, 2014 at 6:13 am

    And I just checked my room and turned off the lights… I guess one night without sleep won’t hurt.

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  • Commented on May 27, 2013 at 4:25 am

    all too familiar. -sion-

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 2:57 pm

    Its always a challenge to keep a pasta creepy and short, a challenge I love to see accepted and completed. Well done.

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  • Commented on June 29, 2014 at 5:03 am

    To find this scary enough to you you will first have to get spooked up by reading Creepypastas hen when you are scared you should read this. xD

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  • Commented on June 5, 2015 at 11:01 am

    And if they’re not there to kill you, I’ll be there…..

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  • Commented on April 7, 2016 at 11:36 am

    I do this all the time and it always creeps me out more and more, AND THIS STORY DID NOT HELP

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  • Commented on April 21, 2013 at 5:03 pm

    0_0 …. nice one…..

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  • Commented on August 9, 2013 at 8:58 pm

    LOVE this

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  • Commented on September 13, 2013 at 11:47 am

    Not like I was planning on sleeping tonight anyways… 0.0

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  • Commented on November 11, 2013 at 4:48 am

    Schweeet =P

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  • Commented on February 24, 2014 at 8:28 pm

    O_o Dammit, it was that night with good sleep! Nice pasta 🙂

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  • Commented on June 4, 2014 at 2:57 am

    For me, the way this was written made the character seem sweet. I tried rereading and it was still the same. I like this. Having something like this once is nice.

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  • Commented on June 29, 2014 at 2:35 am

    I always liked playing hide ‘n seek…

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  • Commented on June 30, 2014 at 5:40 am

    awesome this pasta is the kind that you can both relate to and be creeped out about love it 😀

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  • Commented on May 19, 2015 at 6:18 pm

    ◉_◉ That is a little creepy. A being that one can never see, like an imaginary friend. No one sees it, no one hears it, no one knows who or what it is.

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  • Commented on August 25, 2015 at 2:25 am

    Good piece of work I like it keep up the good work

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  • Commented on December 30, 2015 at 7:06 pm

    I laugh, because I’ve seen you as you hide, I just have the courtesy to not bother you.
    Nice story! 4/5

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  • Commented on March 19, 2016 at 4:27 pm

    Short but well written and effectively creepy.Great pasta

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  • Commented on May 18, 2016 at 3:02 am

    Amazing. I just looked around even though it said not to and my subconsious was like, “idiot!”

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  • Commented on January 25, 2016 at 8:39 pm

    This seemed more creepy to me than it should be since my house is very old and the rooms are dark most of the time. 9/10

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  • Commented on September 19, 2016 at 3:33 am

    I like it! 🙂
    Great Job! 😀
    5/5

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  • Commented on October 18, 2016 at 5:55 pm

    Well, I wasn’t planning on sleeping tonight anyway.

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  • Commented on May 16, 2014 at 9:41 am

    Simple but effective 3/5

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  • Commented on July 17, 2016 at 8:36 pm

    original and short but not very creepy or long

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  • funnymouth666
    Commented on August 8, 2016 at 4:32 am

    Very tasty pasta.

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  • Commented on November 28, 2016 at 11:51 am

    Haha brilliant!

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  • Commented on December 1, 2016 at 1:11 am

    I don’t need sleep anyway

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  • Commented on April 20, 2015 at 8:45 pm

    Not creepy.

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