I’m Worried About My Son

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I’m very worried about my son.

More than worried, at this point. Terrified. His behavior these past few weeks is not normal, not healthy. It makes me think there’s something wrong.

At first, he would just come and stand at the door way. He did this at night, just before I’d be ready to fall asleep. I’d roll over to turn off the lamp, and he’d be standing there, in the doorway. I used to try to speak to him. I don’t do that anymore. He never has answered me.

He just stares.

A couple of days ago, he graduated from standing in the doorway to coming in and sitting on the bed. He still doesn’t speak. I have asked him what he wants. I’ve asked him if anything is bothering him. It’s not like him to be so quiet.

He usually waits until my wife is asleep. That’s the part that gets me. She always falls asleep before me, and he has never come in when she’s awake. But then, she didn’t have a hand in this.

If something doesn’t change soon, I don’t know what I’m gonna do. I’m starting to feel like he knows that I’m the one who killed him.

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 9:11 pm

    Fantastic plot twist! I obviously approved this when I first read it. 😀

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  • Commented on September 28, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    Boy, that escalated quickly

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 8:49 pm

    well writen, great pasta.

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 5:15 pm

    Great twist at the end, keep up the good work 🙂

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 3:33 am

    I didn’t plan on sleeping anyway, oh well

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 1:42 pm

    Welp, that one got me. Well written, quite a plot twist there my friend.

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  • DarkThoughts
    Commented on September 26, 2015 at 2:31 pm

    Love it….great twist, great plot, just love it. Also, has anyone else noticed how all the great pastas come out when schools in session?

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  • Commented on September 30, 2015 at 10:11 pm

    extremely well written pasta! keep up the good work!

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  • Commented on September 28, 2015 at 8:20 pm

    I usually don’t like short stories. But this one was really good. Great plot twist (:

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  • Commented on October 24, 2015 at 9:53 pm

    damn, great plot twist

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 9:06 pm

    so much for sleeping, all of those Creepypasta stories I have read, yet this one gets me… Whats up with that?…. ANYWAY!! *Clap* *Clap* *clap* BRAVO!!!

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 6:52 pm

    Interesting story

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  • Commented on September 27, 2015 at 12:32 am

    I never would have thought the son was a ghost, great plot twist.

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  • Commented on September 27, 2015 at 2:47 am

    And the baby bears pasta was just right!

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  • Commented on September 27, 2015 at 7:05 am

    amazing!! simple but effective i read it like 3 times over X3 great story!!

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  • Commented on May 19, 2016 at 12:24 am

    The weasel went pop and the plot went twisty twisty twist and my mind went what

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 6:46 pm

    Did not see that coming but I wish it was longer

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  • Commented on September 27, 2015 at 7:10 pm

    Short and sweet

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  • Commented on September 29, 2015 at 1:10 pm

    I love the shorter stories, because they can give you a quick creepy feeling just to tide you over if you’re in a hurry. This one had a fantastic plot twist. Really wasn’t expecting it. Good pasta, keep writing!

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  • dixiefayth
    Commented on September 30, 2015 at 2:23 pm

    cool story totally rad

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  • Commented on September 30, 2015 at 3:24 pm

    Great story. I did a narration on

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  • Commented on September 30, 2015 at 3:25 pm

    Great story. I did a narration of it over on my channel. If anyone wants to check me out my channel name is ‘Creepypasta Lad’ 🙂

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  • Commented on September 30, 2015 at 8:22 pm

    Really good ^u^

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  • Commented on October 1, 2015 at 12:32 pm

    Awesome!

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  • Commented on October 1, 2015 at 2:15 pm

    that was great loved the twist did not expect that

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  • Commented on October 2, 2015 at 10:52 pm

    Nice plot twist. Didn’t even see it coming.

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  • Commented on October 5, 2015 at 2:54 am

    Love it! Short but creepy! Love the plot twist!

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  • Commented on October 8, 2015 at 4:36 pm

    Love It! It was confusing at first, but the turn of events at the end are amazing!

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  • Commented on April 1, 2016 at 5:04 pm

    Whoa 0_0
    well…
    okay then…
    sleep is for the weak.

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  • Commented on October 18, 2016 at 6:04 pm

    Please keep writing more creepypastas.

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 12:15 am

    Love this-short, sweet, and jarring.

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 7:59 pm

    I loved this. Good twist!

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  • Commented on October 12, 2015 at 9:41 pm

    I like this story I was not expecting that. But why kill your own son?? Anyway it goes that story is now one of my faves.

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  • Him
    Commented on October 14, 2015 at 8:45 pm

    This story was concise enough to really create an impact and raise questions for the reader (in the best of ways). Very well done.

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  • Commented on November 30, 2015 at 1:23 pm

    That twist in events though

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  • Commented on January 7, 2016 at 5:36 am

    Great plot twist!

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  • Commented on March 20, 2016 at 3:46 am

    I really liked this pasta I like the plot of it and the plot twist I would have never imagined that the son was a ghost or that the dad killed him anyway I hope u keep writing

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  • Commented on April 16, 2016 at 6:29 pm

    Awesome. Totally didn’t expect the ending. Hope to see more from this author.

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  • Commented on June 10, 2016 at 8:44 pm

    Wow that was awesome. this is now one of my favorite pastas

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  • Miss Muffet
    Commented on June 18, 2016 at 2:01 am

    Oh.

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  • Commented on June 28, 2016 at 3:29 pm

    That plot twist is so good! 5/5 Don’t stop writing!

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  • Commented on August 9, 2016 at 5:45 pm

    nice, I did not see that twist coming! Love your stories btw

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  • Commented on August 10, 2016 at 1:17 am

    This is great. I didn’t expect the ending. Great job.

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  • Commented on November 3, 2016 at 9:06 pm

    That was such a great plot twist! The title made me believe that the son was possessed or something of that nature so I didn’t expect that ending at all. It gave me the creeps. Keep up the good work!

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  • Commented on April 30, 2017 at 2:08 pm

    Good read for a short story

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  • Commented on June 21, 2017 at 7:28 pm

    woah…. did not expect that….

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  • Commented on June 24, 2017 at 4:49 pm

    Damn that’t goog. That plot twist at the end 😀

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  • Commented on September 29, 2017 at 1:54 am

    I like how creepy yet short it is. its really nice to find a story that’s not fifteen pages long

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  • Commented on October 2, 2015 at 7:09 am

    The ending is just so calculated. Despite the size, it hammers in the message pretty well.

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  • Commented on October 8, 2015 at 4:35 pm

    i have to say this had me confused. It took an interesting twist, and I liked it. Good thing I read all of this during the day, otherwise I wouldn’t be able to sleep a wink.

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  • nightsky
    Commented on September 29, 2015 at 7:37 pm

    omg loved it good twist looks like he killed his son and now hes a lost sprint loved it just to say

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 7:52 pm

    wait what so he was a ghost please tell me i really want to no and btw your a awesome writer

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