I’m very worried about my son.
More than worried, at this point. Terrified. His behavior these past few weeks is not normal, not healthy. It makes me think there’s something wrong.
At first, he would just come and stand at the door way. He did this at night, just before I’d be ready to fall asleep. I’d roll over to turn off the lamp, and he’d be standing there, in the doorway. I used to try to speak to him. I don’t do that anymore. He never has answered me.
He just stares.
A couple of days ago, he graduated from standing in the doorway to coming in and sitting on the bed. He still doesn’t speak. I have asked him what he wants. I’ve asked him if anything is bothering him. It’s not like him to be so quiet.
He usually waits until my wife is asleep. That’s the part that gets me. She always falls asleep before me, and he has never come in when she’s awake. But then, she didn’t have a hand in this.
If something doesn’t change soon, I don’t know what I’m gonna do. I’m starting to feel like he knows that I’m the one who killed him.
53 Comments on 'I’m Worried About My Son'
wait what so he was a ghost please tell me i really want to no and btw your a awesome writer
well writen, great pasta.
Fantastic plot twist! I obviously approved this when I first read it. 😀
Love this-short, sweet, and jarring.
I didn’t plan on sleeping anyway, oh well
Welp, that one got me. Well written, quite a plot twist there my friend.
Love it….great twist, great plot, just love it. Also, has anyone else noticed how all the great pastas come out when schools in session?
Great twist at the end, keep up the good work 🙂
Did not see that coming but I wish it was longer
I loved this. Good twist!
so much for sleeping, all of those Creepypasta stories I have read, yet this one gets me… Whats up with that?…. ANYWAY!! *Clap* *Clap* *clap* BRAVO!!!
I never would have thought the son was a ghost, great plot twist.
And the baby bears pasta was just right!
amazing!! simple but effective i read it like 3 times over X3 great story!!
Short and sweet
Boy, that escalated quickly
I usually don’t like short stories. But this one was really good. Great plot twist (:
I love the shorter stories, because they can give you a quick creepy feeling just to tide you over if you’re in a hurry. This one had a fantastic plot twist. Really wasn’t expecting it. Good pasta, keep writing!
omg loved it good twist looks like he killed his son and now hes a lost sprint loved it just to say
cool story totally rad
Great story. I did a narration on
Great story. I did a narration of it over on my channel. If anyone wants to check me out my channel name is ‘Creepypasta Lad’ 🙂
Really good ^u^
extremely well written pasta! keep up the good work!
that was great loved the twist did not expect that
The ending is just so calculated. Despite the size, it hammers in the message pretty well.
Nice plot twist. Didn’t even see it coming.
Love it! Short but creepy! Love the plot twist!
i have to say this had me confused. It took an interesting twist, and I liked it. Good thing I read all of this during the day, otherwise I wouldn’t be able to sleep a wink.
Love It! It was confusing at first, but the turn of events at the end are amazing!
I like this story I was not expecting that. But why kill your own son?? Anyway it goes that story is now one of my faves.
This story was concise enough to really create an impact and raise questions for the reader (in the best of ways). Very well done.
damn, great plot twist
That twist in events though
Great plot twist!
I really liked this pasta I like the plot of it and the plot twist I would have never imagined that the son was a ghost or that the dad killed him anyway I hope u keep writing
sleep is for the weak.
Awesome. Totally didn’t expect the ending. Hope to see more from this author.
The weasel went pop and the plot went twisty twisty twist and my mind went what
Wow that was awesome. this is now one of my favorite pastas
That plot twist is so good! 5/5 Don’t stop writing!
nice, I did not see that twist coming! Love your stories btw
This is great. I didn’t expect the ending. Great job.
Please keep writing more creepypastas.
That was such a great plot twist! The title made me believe that the son was possessed or something of that nature so I didn’t expect that ending at all. It gave me the creeps. Keep up the good work!
Good read for a short story
woah…. did not expect that….
Damn that’t goog. That plot twist at the end 😀
I like how creepy yet short it is. its really nice to find a story that’s not fifteen pages long
Nice plot twist the son being dead was not expected