I was a nurse fresh out of my program and eager to start working.
After applying to many different hospitals I was accepted by a prestigious private hospital specializing in obstetrics and prenatal care. The hospital was famous for its surrogacy programs and had global reputation of delivering the healthiest and genetically superior babies.
I was of course excited and couldn’t wait to see my new hospitals and meet my new coworkers.
I arrived at the famous ‘Blessed Wing Hospital’ at 9am sharp. I was greeted by several upbeat and cheery nurses and doctors, and my attending was just as wonderful. It didn’t take long for me to make friends and fit right in with the routine. I was of course restricted from full access to the hospital seeing as I was new and needed to earn my privileges.
The only thing that struck me as odd was the fact that I never saw any patients coming into the hospital or leaving. What I did see were many happy couples arriving to adopt their newborns. I never saw the surrogates, before or even after delivery.
My job was to tend to the many newborns and ensure that each baby was taken home by their proper parents.
It was a very fulfilling job to work with such small, innocent bundles of life. Each baby was perfectly healthy and no two babies looked alike. It was as if each baby had been custom designed before birth.
I only had one problem with working in the hospital. When I was outside the nursery and waiting room I could hear loud, painful screams of the women in labor. The doctors and nurses did their best to ease the delivering women but the screams continued. Stranger still the screams seemed less like screams of pain and more like screams of terror. I had learned to tune of the screams and focus on the miracle that followed, that is until I head one woman scream something I will never forget: “Why do you keep doing this to me? Please, I want to leave!”
After a few months of working I felt confident enough to start asking about the oddly absent patients. My questions were met with silence and stern looks from both the doctors and the nurses. Finally my attending pulled me aside and told me to stop asking questions and just do my job. There was nothing to worry about.
The screams of pain and terror continued to ring out through the hallways of the hospital. I found solace in the nursery where I could tend to the newborns, but the screams would always follow me as I walked through the halls.
My first year passed with no incident and I was no longer on restricted access. I could freely roam throughout the entire hospital, but there was no reason for me to wander beyond the nursery or doctor’s lounge.
My curiosity, however, got the better of me. Shortly after my 1 year anniversary I was wandering the halls when I heard the screaming of another woman in labor. But what caught my attention was this was the same woman I heard pleading with the doctors shortly after I started working. She was delivering a second baby in less than two years, this was very risky and as a professional surrogate she would know better than to do this. Again I heard her screaming in fear and begging the doctor’s to let her go. I didn’t understand. Let her go? Was she being hospitalized against her will?
I waited two more weeks before I finally had the nerve to check out the back rooms of the hospital. I was on the night shift and with little activity it was easy for me to slip by unnoticed. I found myself walking down a long hallway with signs pointing in the direction of the numerous delivery rooms as well as a second doctor’s lounge.
It was then I heard a woman cry out in pain. I had come to recognize that cry of pain as a woman deep in labor. The odd thing is her cry came from behind a door labeled ‘Incubators’.
I didn’t see anyone else in the maternity wing or exiting the delivery rooms so I went into room to check on her. I wish I hadn’t.
When I opened the door what I saw sent a wave of nausea that I can still taste to this day.
The large room had two dozen beds, each bed holding a woman in different stages of pregnancies. The women were all young and of various races, and each woman had both of their arms and both of their legs amputated.
The women were helpless and alone. Tubes and I.V.’s containing nutrients and fluids snaked across the women’s mutilated bodies as the only means to keep them alive.
One blonde woman, her belly absolutely massive in comparison to her mangled body, spotted me and begged me to help her.
“Please! You have to get us out of here!”
I couldn’t speak. I couldn’t even move. I just stared at them with my hand over my mouth.
“Please!” She cried out again. “They won’t let us leave! They keep using us, using our bodies!”
I backed away from the sight, toward the door.
The woman cried out to me, tears in her eyes. “We can’t move! We can’t escape, please, you have to help us!”
Fear set in and I bolted from the room. I returned to the nursery of the hospital and stared with fascination at the innocent newborns that laid before me. This couldn’t be the result of such a horrific experiment, could it?
My shift came to an end I couldn’t get out of the hospital fast enough. As soon as I pulled into my front driveway I threw up on the grass and began weeping for the poor women I had abandoned.
I didn’t sleep that night. I kept hearing the cries of pain and the pleading for their freedom.
Two days later I returned to the hospital and began my shift. I walked into the nursery and my eye was immediately drawn to a newborn with blonde hair. The same hair of the woman who had begged for my help.
And I knew what I saw was true.
I lied to my attending and said I was going home early because I was feeling ill. As soon as I was in the safety of my home I called the police and told them what I had seen.
The police arrived at the hospital and found the same gruesome sight that I had found.
The women were taken to a new hospital and my hospital had been shut down. I breathed a sigh of relief and waited for the story to break on the news. But no story aired. There was no mention of the human incubators that had been freed from the hospital.
In fact, there was no record of the women arriving at the new hospital for proper care…
74 Comments on 'Incubators'
I like this story it sent chills down my spine just reading it. I love that it has that, “is this story actually real and true” feel to it. Job well done
This is good. Freaky, disturbing, and shocking in different ways. More detail and length would make this better. Also, if such a terrible thing was going on, wouldn’t they have better security? Good original idea! Don’t see many of those. 9/10
Really enjoyed this pasta, wish it was longer though. You could’ve added in so much more, like maybe she was caught snooping and forced to be an incubator herself. 7/10
Fucking terrifying and overall creative.
This was a great story. Maybe a bit more detail, but I like the length; it’s straight-forward and to the point. It’s very disturbing and the writing paints a perfect picture of the scenes. I am a big fan of this. 9/10
This was really good. It was short, disturbing, and creepy. 5/5
This is g-great I give it a 9.5/10 it would be better if you’d add a b-bit more detail
Not only is this story delightfully creepy and unsettling, it’s also a perfect commentary on how women are viewed as nothing more than baby-makers by much of society.
I know paranormal creepypasta is the staple diet of readers here. But sometimes real world pasta is very unnerving, I mean this could be happening (conspiracy pasta anyone?)…
This is fairly well made, good job m8.
That was an amazingly good story! Had me hanging on the edge of my seat! 10/10.
great job loved the suspense
I loved this but I think I could rewrite it far better. Am I allowed to do that? I’d credit the original author
The scene is quite similar as one movie i saw. I forgot what the title/ main plot of the movie but it has the same scene as this creepypasta, where a hospital kidnap/ use young female body to create babies and the babies is then given to couples. anybody know the tiltle of the movie?
anyway, great pasta!
its really freky
awful ending. “they were moved to different hospitals. But nothing said they were.” Were they? It was stated as fact and then “oh but maybe not” then it’s over.
Hey! I’m looking to start a scary story/creepypasta narraation YouTube channel. I was wondering if you would be okay with me using your story as a video? If not that’s absolutely fine, but I would really appreciate the opportunity!
I’m new, I find this creepypasta original honestly.
Very nice and freaky. I adore it.
Deliciously chilling and freaky 10/10
this was boring to be honest but still a decent story i give it a 4/10
thats really a good story!
This is a great idea, the length is unfortunate. With more backstory, setup, characters, and an explanation to how the secret was kept so long, and who was behind it and their fate, it could be an instant classic on this site. All in all, it was pretty disturbing and entertaining to read, keep up the good work!
Wow! I give this a 10. Excellent story! Super creepy if it really happened.
Everything was amazing but I feel it needed a stronger ending.
This had my heart beating faster as I continued to read it! 9/10
100% disturbing. Good thing I’m not a woman, or at least don’t have a egg….
This is AMAZING!!! Great twists throughout, and most importantly, kept the reader itching to know more!
Astounding job! One of the best real-world pastas I have read yet! 10/10
It doesn’t have supernatural stuff and still remains creepy which makes me even happier about this, if you watched Orphan you will know what I am trying to say. Things that can literally happen in real life, without including ghosts or other creatures. Not too long, not too detailed yet it’s very good. 5/5
This makes me wonder if they probably got put into another hospital like that. ( 〇□〇）
That was amazing and sad! Keep it up. 5/10
wow this earned another star the last time i read it. it’s not that scary but is definitely a good read.
dam thats a freaky story feels a little empty tho missing something
I totally Love your creepypasta!!!!!!
So good! I would have liked more detail and a longer story. Like , if the cops did nothing then you should feel super unsafe and be constantly looking over your shoulder.
Definitely an enjoyable freaky story! I love the plot twist although the ending could’ve been more conclusive.
Having children and experiencing childbirth, this story was absolutely horrific to me! Good Job!
Great story, really enjoyed it. Would have liked if it was a bit longer.
That was a good chill, surely worth the read.
Very short and to the point in dark theme I like it!
Amazing story, very creative! 10/10
This is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My favorite episode of The Blacklist had this same basic premise. Loved it 5/5
Wow. Just wow. I absolutely love this! 10/10 this more original then most stories on here! I don’t know where you get these ideas, bit I have one request….teach me……..
Maybe more detail on the girls’ condition to make it creepier but overall freakin awesome 9/10
Read Borrasca if you liked this story.
Great Story! Scary, and interesting! Could have had a better ending, But very original! 9.5/10!
I loved it. I was never bored, and I just couldn’t keep my eyes off of it. It was written well, and was morbid. Perfect.
It was ok, in my opinion.
guys i really have a weird boner right now
Yo, I highly enjoyed this story. I put out a narration of it and credited back to you. Keep it up and MAKE THIS A SERIES!!!
Spine-tingling and appalling. A little too short, but overall incredibly creative, descriptive, and downright shocking. Just the sheer thought of something like this being a reality is almost too much. I loved it.
This is probably someone’s fetish
I wish every user would submit stories as good as this one. Not a single complaint. 5/5 stars
I loved this story! I wish it had been a little longer but it definitely gave me chills.
That awesome and freaky but awesome. Right now I’m wondering what happened to the hospital and the patients inside it. But that was super cool keep up the good work.
SO gut-churning… (*pukes in the toilet*) 10/10
Very original idea, and nicely directed. It wasn’t enough to have me thinking about it over night but it was a good read; slow at first but the moment I seen the word amputated I knew I was in for something much more interesting. 4/5
Nice job with this, it had all the stuff on a normal pasta plus a little extra.
And It makes you wonder
If the women never made it to the hospital then were they just ghosts, or did something happen to them?
I felt sick to my stomach after reading this but it was amazing…and the saddest part about this, is that things like that used to happen…Its so wrong…and Im pretty sure the governments are involved somehow cause there is no way that people would allow that to pass in the house of reps.
Very good story and it gave me chills.
Seems like a dumbed down version of Borrasca. Not saying you copied it but it’s eerily similar, it seems Borrasca has inspired you. Very good job!
I wonder who was impregnating them….
I’m new to this but this is one of my favorites so far. I would love to see this as a movie.
Good, unique read; I do wish that the grammar and punctuation was cleaned up before it was uploaded.
Nice freaky and creepy story. 10/10 from me
Eep!! So creepy!! 😮 I’ve always been scared of hospitals…
Oh this was lovely. Thank you, my only critique being I wish it were longer. I would have loved to have been described the child she would have bore and the excruciating pain of becoming a surrogate mother. Understandably, the fear of forced breeding will only play well for some audience.
Man that’s disturbing and creepy! While some of it is predictable, it still unsettled me. That takes quite a bit so props to the writer!
Good story, reminds me of ONE on r/nosleep called Borrasca.
i loved the premise for this story.. it was pretty good and pretty creepy to imagine that all while reading.. however i am so sad isnt longer.. would love to see more elaboration on this one !!!
nicely done nonetheless.
Wow… This is creepy pasta has genuinely frighten me, just that climax on the reveal of the incubators.
I was wondering if I could narrate this sometime?
I can share the link to you if you like?
My gods, that was amazing that’s what I expect from creepypastas
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