Inside Your Mind

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Let me guess, you’re on here trying to freak yourself out or find a pasta worth sharing, right? Me too, but nothing seems to spike your interest or really sends a chill down your spine. Take a look at the videos too, yet still – there’s nothing. You really are getting bored now, aren’t you? To me, this ritual seems to happen quite a lot, what about you? An idea has probably just popped into your head – “why am I reading this?”

Interesting how you’re still reading this. Place yourself in my shoes and stop reading the pattern. You didn’t see it? Read every first word of the sentences before these two, maybe then what I’m about to tell you will make sense.

Have you ever thought about what goes through a psychopath’s mind? How they dream about feeling anyone’s blood drip from their hands. Drip, drip, drip. At first the pattern unsettled me. However now it’s music to our ears. Don’t pretend you don’t hear it late at night. You tell your family, but they insist it’s just a faulty tap so you think that too. You’ve already started to become one of us. You’ve gotten used to the sound.

Don’t fool yourself anymore, don’t deny those thoughts. The ones where you grin as you tear your enemies body apart and recieve immense pleasure from it. Let yourself be consumed by those dreams – it will cause you no harm as they’re just dreams, right?

Each day, you become more like us. You see us on TV and your family say how we’re the scum of society, but you know better now.

We’re waiting.

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  • Commented on February 4, 2015 at 12:54 pm

    For me, it’s not the sound of the dripping but the thickness and warmth of the blood. I’d prefer to lather it on my hands than to let it drip.

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  • Commented on February 1, 2015 at 7:03 pm

    Maybe I am a Psychopath. O.o

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  • Commented on February 7, 2015 at 2:45 am

    Absolutely lovely, I can’t stop smiling.

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  • Alex
    Commented on April 13, 2015 at 11:18 pm

    *slow clap steadily increasing to a moderate clap*

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  • Cileun
    Commented on April 22, 2016 at 11:34 pm

    Let me take you to an interesting place.

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  • Commented on February 3, 2015 at 11:22 pm

    so im a psychopath…………………… whoa @.@

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  • yourneighbor
    Commented on February 19, 2015 at 2:50 pm

    so dark, i love it

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  • Commented on April 9, 2015 at 6:52 pm

    I wrote this sometime last year and submitted it, then proceeded to forget about it. After coming back and reading good feedback, I am honestly so grateful that you guys enjoyed it. Maybe some more work will come soon, but who knows. Thanks.

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  • Commented on February 29, 2016 at 3:39 am

    As a psychopath I can say this story isn’t true… Okay, mostly isn’t true.. Fine. Its true.

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  • Commented on February 3, 2015 at 4:15 pm

    That was great work.

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  • Commented on July 16, 2015 at 8:44 pm

    interesting i mean >.< brain fart lol

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  • Commented on February 29, 2016 at 2:56 am

    Nice viewpoint and style here.

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  • MetalSS
    Commented on February 3, 2015 at 5:02 pm

    Cool have not seen anything like this befor.

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  • Dale John
    Commented on March 31, 2015 at 10:18 am

    Hey guys I read this creepypasta on my channel, Welsh creepypasta reader looking for some love :p here’s the link if you wanna hear it :)! http://youtu.be/pZhWamtA_XQ

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  • Commented on May 29, 2015 at 1:06 am

    this is SO true! i love it

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  • whywhatwho
    Commented on July 16, 2015 at 4:00 pm

    oh that explains it

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  • Commented on July 16, 2015 at 8:44 pm

    [spoiler]let me take you to a better place/spoiler] it said

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  • Commented on July 16, 2015 at 8:45 pm

    wow i suck at comments xD

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  • Commented on August 17, 2015 at 5:49 am

    As a whole I enjoyed the story, but I feel the reading the first words part was a tad unnecessary. still good

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  • Commented on September 8, 2015 at 1:14 pm

    love it!

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  • Commented on September 24, 2015 at 2:03 pm

    creepy my smirk wont leave

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 10:55 am

    Ok different.

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  • Commented on October 30, 2015 at 3:58 pm

    Good story also this is what it says if you really can’t find out in the first paragraph Let me take you to me I say you should find out for your self though. This really hooked me at the start and kept me in.

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  • TheMimiGeneratio
    Commented on November 11, 2015 at 5:26 pm

    Let Me Take You To An Interesting Place is what the author was trying to say.

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  • Commented on August 17, 2016 at 3:11 pm

    That was just… wow! I loved this one! I really liked the perspective this story is presented in 🙂

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  • Commented on September 15, 2016 at 6:17 pm

    Short and straight to the point, just the way i like it. 🙂

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  • Commented on March 10, 2015 at 3:36 pm

    This is true. Sooooooo true!

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  • Commented on June 1, 2016 at 9:36 pm

    I would heat up a knife so that it is blazing hot, like white hot, and then slowly cut off small parts of the body, like first, to the first knuckle of your fingers and toes, then second knuckle, third, at the joint, ect. I will do this until I get to the torso. I will make them watch dogs devour them. Then, I will burn them to ashes. Then carve out a cliche message on their back/abdomen like: You’ve already been warned! or Don’t cross paths with me again! or something. The reason is, is that since the knife is white hot, when you slice through flesh, it will cauterize the wound ( Cauterize : Verb :to burn the skin or flesh of [a wound with a heated instrument or caustic substance, typically to stop bleeding or prevent the wound from becoming infected]) This way, with the blood being stopped, the person won’t bleed out. Which means lots of pain. And no relief knowing that you will soon die because you will bleed out. Because the blood is stopped by the heat. After this I would take the knife, and cut out the tongue so they won’t be able to tell anybody it was me. I will then set the hair on fire, but I wont let it get to the face. I would put it out with boiling water. I will then proceed to tattoo them with my knife of white hot pain, and then I will dump them in salt, drench them in lime juice and baby oil, and let them sit in the sun for about 30 minutes to an hour. Almost done, I will force there eyes open, and slowly, ever so slowly, take the knife and slowly, did I mention slowly? Gauge their eyes out. After they are out, I will stick nails where the eyes used to be. Then, I will force a liter of soda down their throats, then give them a pack of mint mentos. But, I will leave the ears perfectly intact, so that they can hear everyones reaction to what they have become. So they can hear woman scream, parents tell their children to look away, and men shout “Good lord what is that monster?” Then, cut off their nose wrap them in a package (with holes) and send them on their way home. After a few years, when they are at a ripe good age, I will return. I will tie them up, inject them with Ebola, yellow fever, black death, and shove a leech down their throat. Then, I will strap meat to their body, and drench them in the blood of their family and friends. I will then, helicopter them out into the middle of the ocean, shove a white hot rod up their anus, over dose them on viagra, and let the sea take it from there.

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  • Commented on May 14, 2015 at 2:15 pm

    … All I got from the first paragraph was “Let me take you to an” I must know what I will be taken to!! But overall it is fantastic work. I am very impressed.

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