Life Within

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My husband and I loved each other very much, but just as most couples we would get into arguments. Out biggest argument always revolved around a single disagreement: children.

I wanted children, he did not.

As the years passed I had hoped he would eventually come around and warm up to the idea of having children, but he remained stubborn and wouldn’t change his mind. I reminded him that if we waited too much longer we’d never be able to conceive a child of our own, but he didn’t seem to care. I even suggested adoption and fostering children but he wouldn’t hear it. “You’re not fit to be a mother!”

His cruel words burned into my memory. I loved him. Why would he say such a thing?

I wanted to carry a baby. I wanted to have a life inside of me, a little piece of him inside of me. I love my husband but he doesn’t have the right to keep me from doing this. No one can stop me.

I threw our my birth control pills and I sabotaged his condoms as I prepared to seduce my husband into a frenzy and lovemaking and passion. My husband, who knew I was desperate for the chance to have a life inside of me, discovered my plan and rejected my advances.

My own husband said I was crazy, that I was becoming obsessed and losing my mind. I loved him so much, how could he say such a horrid thing to me? I’m his loving wife.

That night I cried. I never cried so hard in all of my life. He didn’t have the right to do this! I would have the life I so craved.

It took me a week but I had my next plan ready. This plan was foolproof, there would be nothing he could do about it. This time he wouldn’t stop me. After he returned home from work I offered him a beer after slipping a dose of crushed sleeping pills into the drink. He of course didn’t taste any of the medicine as he greedily downed the offered beer. Within twenty minutes he was in a deep sleep, practically unconscious.

I dragged my husband into our bedroom and onto the bed. I stripped off his clothes and began kissing his body all over. “You can’t take this from me.” I whispered into his ear as he remained blissfully unaware of what was about to happen to him.

Hours passed as I had my way with his body. He didn’t awaken from his drug-induced slumber. Not once did he feel my warm lips pressing constantly against his cool skin, enjoying every sensation I felt as I carefully finished my task.

The bed sheets were soaked from my night activity. But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood. My husband’s blood.

I sat on the floor of the bedroom, my back leaning against the foot of our family bed. I ran my hands lovingly over my tight stomach, thrilled about the life I was now carrying. I wouldn’t be able to enjoy the life inside of me for the full nine months like most women, but the few days I had with it would be the best of my life.

It’s no easy feat to devour an entire human being in a single night. But it was worth it.

I finally have a piece of my husband inside of me.

Original Author: Anonymous

77 Comments on 'Life Within'

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  • Commented on January 4, 2018 at 6:09 pm

    THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY

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  • Commented on November 28, 2017 at 7:34 pm

    add my skype; better.eat.that.candy@gmail.com

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  • Commented on December 12, 2017 at 9:20 pm

    Oh man, that was twisted. I loved it!!! Honestly did not see the ending coming. Well done!

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  • Commented on November 26, 2017 at 2:48 am

    A woman that wants to have a child would do anything to have one, even if it means killing her husband to do it.

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  • Commented on November 7, 2017 at 5:58 pm

    Wow! Thats pretty good! I dont understand the tags however. Ritual? I still thought that the story was amazing, and the twist at the end really got me! 4/5

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  • Commented on November 6, 2017 at 2:01 pm

    Impressive

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  • Commented on November 17, 2017 at 8:53 pm

    Pretty good story:)

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  • Commented on December 22, 2017 at 2:45 pm

    I really enjoyed that and think there should be more storys like these

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  • Commented on November 17, 2017 at 6:52 pm

    I expected her to make love, not kill him! Such a twist! 10/10!

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  • xii
    Commented on November 17, 2017 at 9:09 pm

    THAT TWIST ENDING THOUGH! 10/10

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  • Commented on November 22, 2017 at 1:18 am

    that was one hell of a twist, love it

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  • Commented on December 5, 2017 at 1:52 pm

    This story was amazing! Please keep writing.

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  • Commented on November 17, 2017 at 3:04 pm

    THAT was a twist. Well done.

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  • HEyyyyy
    Commented on November 6, 2017 at 7:37 pm

    Nice Story Mate! 5 Stars!

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  • Commented on November 8, 2017 at 3:09 pm

    I eat these pastas up like candies! Great pasta!

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  • Commented on November 10, 2017 at 1:03 pm

    Mix of romantic story and scary, pretty interesting

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  • Commented on November 14, 2017 at 1:26 am

    Very intriguing, I enjoyed it very much, i loved the twist at the end.

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  • Commented on November 16, 2017 at 7:31 pm

    Amazing Story! Defiantly a twist in the story there! 🙂

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  • Commented on December 10, 2017 at 5:39 am

    10/10 VERY DELICIOUS

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  • Commented on December 11, 2017 at 7:07 pm

    I really liked this story it is not what you would expect keep up the good work maybe add a little bit more detail to make it even more eerie

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  • Commented on December 28, 2017 at 12:58 am

    Oh man- The use of the first person was perfectly fitting for the story-line!

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  • bug
    Commented on January 2, 2018 at 11:34 pm

    That ending was the best plot twist I have come across in a while

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  • Commented on January 4, 2018 at 8:33 pm

    Wow… Very unexpected ending….

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  • Commented on January 27, 2018 at 7:18 pm

    I didn’t think anyone could freak me out that quickly. Nicely done! Didn’t see that twist coming at all.

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  • Commented on February 4, 2018 at 6:00 am

    Amazing, twisted creativity. Did not see that coming, and I really enjoyed how you wrote this. Great job well done !

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  • Commented on February 18, 2018 at 1:08 pm

    Holy hell, that twist! I absolutely loved this story and it’s super creative! Well Done!

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  • HEyyyyy
    Commented on November 6, 2017 at 7:41 pm

    Oh God nevermind

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  • KInsey
    Commented on November 7, 2017 at 1:17 am

    that was weird…

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  • Vae Vobis
    Commented on November 8, 2017 at 4:32 am

    That is one crazy bitch.

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  • Commented on November 11, 2017 at 8:37 pm

    THAT SHYAMALAN TWIST, THOUGH.

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  • Commented on November 13, 2017 at 9:12 pm

    [i didnt think she was gonna eat him wow…]

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  • Commented on November 13, 2017 at 11:17 pm

    i did not see that coming

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  • Marion
    Commented on November 14, 2017 at 1:59 pm

    i didn’t expect she is the monster, i thought the baby will become the monster.

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  • Commented on November 16, 2017 at 9:33 am

    Kinda predictable

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  • Commented on November 17, 2017 at 6:41 am

    whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

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  • Commented on November 17, 2017 at 5:05 pm

    Holy shit… That was a quick turn of events, yet I wonder how did he die? did she give him too many pills or… I dont know.

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  • Commented on November 18, 2017 at 2:58 pm

    twisted hua

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  • Commented on November 23, 2017 at 10:32 am

    It was a good, promising twist but then it lacked build up. I, personally, needed to know if the husband knew if she was a cannibal or a monster. It had great pieces but it needed to be tied together. But anyways, good job.

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  • Commented on November 24, 2017 at 10:38 am

    the was some spelling problems with in the story but the twist at the end was a great and unexpected.

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  • pupper
    Commented on November 25, 2017 at 6:28 am

    hOLY SHIT

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  • Commented on November 28, 2017 at 5:20 pm

    This twist was pretty good xD

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  • Commented on November 29, 2017 at 3:54 am

    i thin the story was really good, but the end could have been written a bit better perhaps. it seems as though the author didnt know how to say what they wanted to right. Also the grammar.when it talks about the husbands blood staining the bedsheets it could have been written as But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood; My husband’s blood.

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  • Commented on November 29, 2017 at 3:01 pm

    Woah that twist thooo, love it.

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  • Commented on November 30, 2017 at 3:57 pm

    wow

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  • Commented on November 30, 2017 at 7:13 pm

    I love that ending 11/10!

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  • Commented on December 1, 2017 at 2:47 pm

    Few spelling errors, but great story over all. Great twist at the end too, although i don’t really get scared that often so i wouldn’t know if it was scary.

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  • Commented on December 2, 2017 at 9:53 am

    10/10!

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  • CreepyDude452
    Commented on December 7, 2017 at 7:18 pm

    This sounds like vore. And that was one hell of a twist! 10/10!

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  • Commented on December 8, 2017 at 1:22 am

    I like it but is she an alien that the only way to reproduce is to eat their mate?

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  • Commented on December 9, 2017 at 5:43 am

    Honestly did not see that coming! Absolutely loved it!

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  • Commented on December 9, 2017 at 11:34 pm

    Ooooooooo that ending sent shivers through my body!! Super creepy!!

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  • Commented on December 11, 2017 at 5:21 pm

    Top ten best anime plot twists.

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  • snow_blister
    Commented on December 13, 2017 at 5:34 pm

    that was one twisted ending…. I srsly didnt expect that to be happening ….omg!! loved it

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  • Commented on December 18, 2017 at 6:54 am

    Awesome! soo cool and horrorful must make and oc out of this.

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  • Commented on December 18, 2017 at 11:51 am

    Oh ma gowwd! Did NOT see that this coming! Wow. Amazing work. Please keep writing!

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  • Commented on December 21, 2017 at 2:34 pm

    i liked it a lot

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  • Commented on December 21, 2017 at 11:01 pm

    Obsession.

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  • Commented on December 21, 2017 at 11:03 pm

    Obsession… By Crazy…

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  • Commented on December 23, 2017 at 6:44 pm

    ….what is this twisted creepy story…..WHO CARES I LOVE IT THE END THO

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  • Me.
    Commented on January 1, 2018 at 3:15 am

    That was amazing. I love the twist ending.

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  • Commented on January 14, 2018 at 3:02 am

    Ok, that took a massive twist that I did not accept. That was amazing.

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  • Commented on January 14, 2018 at 2:39 pm

    7/10voidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoid

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  • baileigh
    Commented on January 17, 2018 at 8:23 pm

    WICKED i have no idea why i think that is funny LOL

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  • Spirit
    Commented on January 18, 2018 at 4:19 am

    Sounds like Angler fish mating…. xD
    Anyhow, great story 🙂

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  • Commented on January 19, 2018 at 2:20 pm

    that’s creeepy

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  • Commented on January 21, 2018 at 12:36 pm

    cons
    Failed to scare me
    subject matter is handled poorly
    forgettable

    pros
    its short (thank god)
    2.5/10

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  • Commented on January 24, 2018 at 2:29 am

    One hell of a twist……. hahahaha, demonic jokesCause cannibalism??? Lol

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  • Commented on January 26, 2018 at 5:42 pm

    The ending was completely unexpected. Wow.

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  • Commented on January 31, 2018 at 7:52 pm

    I’m 99.9% sure that’s not how it works, but hey… I’m not one to diss it till I try it. >:)

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  • Commented on February 1, 2018 at 5:40 pm

    That was masterfully crafted and enjoyed every bit of it! The way your words led me to a false idea made it all more enjoyable to read the false ending! Whether you continue with this kind of writing or not, consider me a fan!

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  • Commented on November 6, 2017 at 7:17 pm

    that was… an unexpected end

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  • Commented on January 4, 2018 at 6:10 pm

    THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY BISCH

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  • Damaged dolly
    Commented on January 25, 2018 at 11:54 pm

    JESUS CHRIST YOU KNOW ADOPTION IS AN OPTION?!

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  • Commented on February 14, 2018 at 7:08 pm

    spelling could be better but other than that it was amazing nice twist and all 4/5

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  • Commented on December 4, 2017 at 2:59 am

    This story is a mess of nonsense. How is eating her husband even remotely comparable to having a child? Not to mention eating an entire grown man in one night is physically impossible. No person would do this, even with the psychopath excuse. This story had violence just for the sake of violence. However, the story was at least grammatically correct. The author has potential if he/she took the time to research and flesh out an idea.

    1/10

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  • Commented on November 14, 2017 at 2:07 pm

    LOVED the twist at the end! Only thing I can really recommend is that you check your spelling, but that’s not super relevant as there’s only, like, two misspellings lol.

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  • Commented on March 1, 2018 at 4:36 pm

    top ten anime betrayals

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