My husband and I loved each other very much, but just as most couples we would get into arguments. Out biggest argument always revolved around a single disagreement: children.
I wanted children, he did not.
As the years passed I had hoped he would eventually come around and warm up to the idea of having children, but he remained stubborn and wouldn’t change his mind. I reminded him that if we waited too much longer we’d never be able to conceive a child of our own, but he didn’t seem to care. I even suggested adoption and fostering children but he wouldn’t hear it. “You’re not fit to be a mother!”
His cruel words burned into my memory. I loved him. Why would he say such a thing?
I wanted to carry a baby. I wanted to have a life inside of me, a little piece of him inside of me. I love my husband but he doesn’t have the right to keep me from doing this. No one can stop me.
I threw our my birth control pills and I sabotaged his condoms as I prepared to seduce my husband into a frenzy and lovemaking and passion. My husband, who knew I was desperate for the chance to have a life inside of me, discovered my plan and rejected my advances.
My own husband said I was crazy, that I was becoming obsessed and losing my mind. I loved him so much, how could he say such a horrid thing to me? I’m his loving wife.
That night I cried. I never cried so hard in all of my life. He didn’t have the right to do this! I would have the life I so craved.
It took me a week but I had my next plan ready. This plan was foolproof, there would be nothing he could do about it. This time he wouldn’t stop me. After he returned home from work I offered him a beer after slipping a dose of crushed sleeping pills into the drink. He of course didn’t taste any of the medicine as he greedily downed the offered beer. Within twenty minutes he was in a deep sleep, practically unconscious.
I dragged my husband into our bedroom and onto the bed. I stripped off his clothes and began kissing his body all over. “You can’t take this from me.” I whispered into his ear as he remained blissfully unaware of what was about to happen to him.
Hours passed as I had my way with his body. He didn’t awaken from his drug-induced slumber. Not once did he feel my warm lips pressing constantly against his cool skin, enjoying every sensation I felt as I carefully finished my task.
The bed sheets were soaked from my night activity. But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood. My husband’s blood.
I sat on the floor of the bedroom, my back leaning against the foot of our family bed. I ran my hands lovingly over my tight stomach, thrilled about the life I was now carrying. I wouldn’t be able to enjoy the life inside of me for the full nine months like most women, but the few days I had with it would be the best of my life.
It’s no easy feat to devour an entire human being in a single night. But it was worth it.
I finally have a piece of my husband inside of me.
100 Comments on 'Life Within'
that was… an unexpected end
Nice Story Mate! 5 Stars!
Oh God nevermind
that was weird…
Wow! Thats pretty good! I dont understand the tags however. Ritual? I still thought that the story was amazing, and the twist at the end really got me! 4/5
That is one crazy bitch.
I eat these pastas up like candies! Great pasta!
Love this one! So great to finally see this one get approves, good work. and I think the ritual tag is barely relevant but because cannibalism is a ritualistic act?
Mix of romantic story and scary, pretty interesting
THAT SHYAMALAN TWIST, THOUGH.
[i didnt think she was gonna eat him wow…]
i did not see that coming
Very intriguing, I enjoyed it very much, i loved the twist at the end.
i didn’t expect she is the monster, i thought the baby will become the monster.
LOVED the twist at the end! Only thing I can really recommend is that you check your spelling, but that’s not super relevant as there’s only, like, two misspellings lol.
Amazing Story! Defiantly a twist in the story there! 🙂
THAT was a twist. Well done.
Holy shit… That was a quick turn of events, yet I wonder how did he die? did she give him too many pills or… I dont know.
I expected her to make love, not kill him! Such a twist! 10/10!
Pretty good story:)
THAT TWIST ENDING THOUGH! 10/10
that was one hell of a twist, love it
It was a good, promising twist but then it lacked build up. I, personally, needed to know if the husband knew if she was a cannibal or a monster. It had great pieces but it needed to be tied together. But anyways, good job.
the was some spelling problems with in the story but the twist at the end was a great and unexpected.
A woman that wants to have a child would do anything to have one, even if it means killing her husband to do it.
This twist was pretty good xD
i thin the story was really good, but the end could have been written a bit better perhaps. it seems as though the author didnt know how to say what they wanted to right. Also the grammar.when it talks about the husbands blood staining the bedsheets it could have been written as But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood; My husband’s blood.
Woah that twist thooo, love it.
I love that ending 11/10!
Few spelling errors, but great story over all. Great twist at the end too, although i don’t really get scared that often so i wouldn’t know if it was scary.
This story is a mess of nonsense. How is eating her husband even remotely comparable to having a child? Not to mention eating an entire grown man in one night is physically impossible. No person would do this, even with the psychopath excuse. This story had violence just for the sake of violence. However, the story was at least grammatically correct. The author has potential if he/she took the time to research and flesh out an idea.
This story was amazing! Please keep writing.
This sounds like vore. And that was one hell of a twist! 10/10!
I like it but is she an alien that the only way to reproduce is to eat their mate?
Honestly did not see that coming! Absolutely loved it!
Ooooooooo that ending sent shivers through my body!! Super creepy!!
10/10 VERY DELICIOUS
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I really liked this story it is not what you would expect keep up the good work maybe add a little bit more detail to make it even more eerie
Oh man, that was twisted. I loved it!!! Honestly did not see the ending coming. Well done!
that was one twisted ending…. I srsly didnt expect that to be happening ….omg!! loved it
Awesome! soo cool and horrorful must make and oc out of this.
Oh ma gowwd! Did NOT see that this coming! Wow. Amazing work. Please keep writing!
i liked it a lot
Obsession… By Crazy…
I really enjoyed that and think there should be more storys like these
….what is this twisted creepy story…..WHO CARES I LOVE IT THE END THO
Oh man- The use of the first person was perfectly fitting for the story-line!
That was amazing. I love the twist ending.
That ending was the best plot twist I have come across in a while
THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY
THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY BISCH
Wow… Very unexpected ending….
Ok, that took a massive twist that I did not accept. That was amazing.
WICKED i have no idea why i think that is funny LOL
Sounds like Angler fish mating…. xD
Anyhow, great story 🙂
Failed to scare me
subject matter is handled poorly
its short (thank god)
One hell of a twist……. hahahaha, demonic jokesCause cannibalism??? Lol
JESUS CHRIST YOU KNOW ADOPTION IS AN OPTION?!
The ending was completely unexpected. Wow.
I didn’t think anyone could freak me out that quickly. Nicely done! Didn’t see that twist coming at all.
I’m 99.9% sure that’s not how it works, but hey… I’m not one to diss it till I try it. >:)
That was masterfully crafted and enjoyed every bit of it! The way your words led me to a false idea made it all more enjoyable to read the false ending! Whether you continue with this kind of writing or not, consider me a fan!
Amazing, twisted creativity. Did not see that coming, and I really enjoyed how you wrote this. Great job well done !
Uh, what? That wasn’t what I was expecting but that was a good way of putting it. “I want a piece of him inside me.” That caught me off guard. Great job! 9/10.
This story want to touch myself.
spelling could be better but other than that it was amazing nice twist and all 4/5
Holy hell, that twist! I absolutely loved this story and it’s super creative! Well Done!
the twist was amazing, holy cow. super creative!! great pasta!
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This is really good, I hope you do more 🙂
Woah holy crap! That twist was amazing ! Nice story
Good story! I like how it starts out as a story that could easily happen in the real world and gets slightly creepier as it progresses. To be honest, I was not expecting this to be that “creepy” and I (stupidly) thought nothing that unpredictable would happen. Obviously, it did. Like many stories, the true creep factor was revealed in the final few paragraphs. It reveals that they are both insane!
I did not expect the twist, however, several grammatical errors distracted my attention, and I wasn’t able to fully enjoy this tale. You have potential, just work on your storytelling a little bit, and you’ll have plenty of perfect ratings!
OMG I LOVED IT BUT WHY DID YOU KILL YOUR FRICKING HUSBAND FOR THAT?!
Maybe I should try that….
HOLY FUCK!!!!!!!!! MIND BLOWN!!!!! 😉
That was creepy!
She got piece of her hubby inside her alright. You gave a whole you meaning to that phrase. She is like a spider widow creature. I can understand why the man was hesitant. XD.
I will give it 7/10
I think I would have rather read about her rapping her husband then BAM! Cannibal!
The story should have been a little loner that way the end would’ve had more impact. It was creepy, however.
That was so crazy!! I loved it the twist at the end was awesome. Great job!!!
Wow, this creepypasta is actually great, not a lot of cliches in here, like most creepypastas would. 10/10 to be honest
This story is great, not scary, but is creepy(hence the name Creepypasta), and worth the read. Love that twist ending. 10/10 to be honest
What… I don’t know what to say… for the first time, a story made me speechless. So this story was about a woman who wanted a baby, his husband was like “No, you’re an unfit mother” so instead of leaving him which would take like a second, she goes through weeks of planning to get herself pregnant and then rapes him. And the ending… why is it there, there was no point to it and it was one of the most dumbest plot twist I’ve read, it felt it was just there to give the readers a quick shock and to say, “HEY, BLUD IZ SCAREY GUIZ OMFG TEH SPOOKS!” Overall, it was a stupid story with a dumb plot twist that didn’t need to be there. This gets a 0/10. Bland and unnecessary.
There are some ticking, baby coveting, balmy weirdos out there, but I agree that the final twist was off.
Having a really original baby out of the process would have been better.
She Was a SUCCUBUS
I did not like this at all. It was so sad
I just…wow. I’m reading different creepypasta stories so I can write my own, and I just love this one, short…not so sweet though