My husband and I loved each other very much, but just as most couples we would get into arguments. Out biggest argument always revolved around a single disagreement: children.
I wanted children, he did not.
As the years passed I had hoped he would eventually come around and warm up to the idea of having children, but he remained stubborn and wouldn’t change his mind. I reminded him that if we waited too much longer we’d never be able to conceive a child of our own, but he didn’t seem to care. I even suggested adoption and fostering children but he wouldn’t hear it. “You’re not fit to be a mother!”
His cruel words burned into my memory. I loved him. Why would he say such a thing?
I wanted to carry a baby. I wanted to have a life inside of me, a little piece of him inside of me. I love my husband but he doesn’t have the right to keep me from doing this. No one can stop me.
I threw our my birth control pills and I sabotaged his condoms as I prepared to seduce my husband into a frenzy and lovemaking and passion. My husband, who knew I was desperate for the chance to have a life inside of me, discovered my plan and rejected my advances.
My own husband said I was crazy, that I was becoming obsessed and losing my mind. I loved him so much, how could he say such a horrid thing to me? I’m his loving wife.
That night I cried. I never cried so hard in all of my life. He didn’t have the right to do this! I would have the life I so craved.
It took me a week but I had my next plan ready. This plan was foolproof, there would be nothing he could do about it. This time he wouldn’t stop me. After he returned home from work I offered him a beer after slipping a dose of crushed sleeping pills into the drink. He of course didn’t taste any of the medicine as he greedily downed the offered beer. Within twenty minutes he was in a deep sleep, practically unconscious.
I dragged my husband into our bedroom and onto the bed. I stripped off his clothes and began kissing his body all over. “You can’t take this from me.” I whispered into his ear as he remained blissfully unaware of what was about to happen to him.
Hours passed as I had my way with his body. He didn’t awaken from his drug-induced slumber. Not once did he feel my warm lips pressing constantly against his cool skin, enjoying every sensation I felt as I carefully finished my task.
The bed sheets were soaked from my night activity. But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood. My husband’s blood.
I sat on the floor of the bedroom, my back leaning against the foot of our family bed. I ran my hands lovingly over my tight stomach, thrilled about the life I was now carrying. I wouldn’t be able to enjoy the life inside of me for the full nine months like most women, but the few days I had with it would be the best of my life.
It’s no easy feat to devour an entire human being in a single night. But it was worth it.
I finally have a piece of my husband inside of me.
77 Comments on 'Life Within'
THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY
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Oh man, that was twisted. I loved it!!! Honestly did not see the ending coming. Well done!
A woman that wants to have a child would do anything to have one, even if it means killing her husband to do it.
Wow! Thats pretty good! I dont understand the tags however. Ritual? I still thought that the story was amazing, and the twist at the end really got me! 4/5
Impressive
Pretty good story:)
I really enjoyed that and think there should be more storys like these
I expected her to make love, not kill him! Such a twist! 10/10!
THAT TWIST ENDING THOUGH! 10/10
that was one hell of a twist, love it
This story was amazing! Please keep writing.
THAT was a twist. Well done.
Nice Story Mate! 5 Stars!
I eat these pastas up like candies! Great pasta!
Mix of romantic story and scary, pretty interesting
Very intriguing, I enjoyed it very much, i loved the twist at the end.
Amazing Story! Defiantly a twist in the story there! 🙂
10/10 VERY DELICIOUS
I really liked this story it is not what you would expect keep up the good work maybe add a little bit more detail to make it even more eerie
Oh man- The use of the first person was perfectly fitting for the story-line!
That ending was the best plot twist I have come across in a while
Wow… Very unexpected ending….
I didn’t think anyone could freak me out that quickly. Nicely done! Didn’t see that twist coming at all.
Amazing, twisted creativity. Did not see that coming, and I really enjoyed how you wrote this. Great job well done !
Holy hell, that twist! I absolutely loved this story and it’s super creative! Well Done!
Oh God nevermind
that was weird…
That is one crazy bitch.
THAT SHYAMALAN TWIST, THOUGH.
[i didnt think she was gonna eat him wow…]
i did not see that coming
i didn’t expect she is the monster, i thought the baby will become the monster.
Kinda predictable
whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
Holy shit… That was a quick turn of events, yet I wonder how did he die? did she give him too many pills or… I dont know.
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It was a good, promising twist but then it lacked build up. I, personally, needed to know if the husband knew if she was a cannibal or a monster. It had great pieces but it needed to be tied together. But anyways, good job.
the was some spelling problems with in the story but the twist at the end was a great and unexpected.
hOLY SHIT
This twist was pretty good xD
i thin the story was really good, but the end could have been written a bit better perhaps. it seems as though the author didnt know how to say what they wanted to right. Also the grammar.when it talks about the husbands blood staining the bedsheets it could have been written as But the fluid wasn’t sweat, it was blood; My husband’s blood.
Woah that twist thooo, love it.
wow
I love that ending 11/10!
Few spelling errors, but great story over all. Great twist at the end too, although i don’t really get scared that often so i wouldn’t know if it was scary.
10/10!
This sounds like vore. And that was one hell of a twist! 10/10!
I like it but is she an alien that the only way to reproduce is to eat their mate?
Honestly did not see that coming! Absolutely loved it!
Ooooooooo that ending sent shivers through my body!! Super creepy!!
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that was one twisted ending…. I srsly didnt expect that to be happening ….omg!! loved it
Awesome! soo cool and horrorful must make and oc out of this.
Oh ma gowwd! Did NOT see that this coming! Wow. Amazing work. Please keep writing!
i liked it a lot
Obsession.
Obsession… By Crazy…
….what is this twisted creepy story…..WHO CARES I LOVE IT THE END THO
That was amazing. I love the twist ending.
Ok, that took a massive twist that I did not accept. That was amazing.
7/10voidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoidvoid
WICKED i have no idea why i think that is funny LOL
Sounds like Angler fish mating…. xD
Anyhow, great story 🙂
that’s creeepy
cons
Failed to scare me
subject matter is handled poorly
forgettable
pros
its short (thank god)
2.5/10
One hell of a twist……. hahahaha, demonic jokesCause cannibalism??? Lol
The ending was completely unexpected. Wow.
I’m 99.9% sure that’s not how it works, but hey… I’m not one to diss it till I try it. >:)
That was masterfully crafted and enjoyed every bit of it! The way your words led me to a false idea made it all more enjoyable to read the false ending! Whether you continue with this kind of writing or not, consider me a fan!
that was… an unexpected end
THAT ISNT HOW YOU MAKE A BABY BISCH
JESUS CHRIST YOU KNOW ADOPTION IS AN OPTION?!
spelling could be better but other than that it was amazing nice twist and all 4/5
This story is a mess of nonsense. How is eating her husband even remotely comparable to having a child? Not to mention eating an entire grown man in one night is physically impossible. No person would do this, even with the psychopath excuse. This story had violence just for the sake of violence. However, the story was at least grammatically correct. The author has potential if he/she took the time to research and flesh out an idea.
1/10
LOVED the twist at the end! Only thing I can really recommend is that you check your spelling, but that’s not super relevant as there’s only, like, two misspellings lol.
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