Locked Doors

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If ever you should walk into a dark room inside your empty house and see a shadowy figure somewhere within, don’t turn on the lights. It’s better not to know. Don’t run to the bathroom, lock the door, and cower in your bathtub. Don’t hurry to a closet, lock the door, and hide underneath a pile of clothes. And especially don’t return to your bedroom, lock the door, and crawl into your bed. Because every other door in your house was already locked, and the figure still managed to get in.

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  • Commented on May 12, 2015 at 3:39 pm

    Well what if you’re an idiot and didn’t lock any doors and it just walked in?

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 11:24 am

    Nice.

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  • creepypastajeffery
    Commented on May 18, 2015 at 2:14 pm

    I would slowly back out…lol

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  • Commented on May 11, 2015 at 7:38 pm

    don’t run don’t turn off the lights boo

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  • Commented on May 29, 2015 at 6:57 am

    what if I’m the shadowy figure?

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 3:06 pm

    REAL NICE

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  • Commented on May 12, 2015 at 3:40 pm

    I like this story it’s really interesting c:

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  • Commented on September 30, 2015 at 11:02 am

    I would probably stare at it to see what it does…lol id be dead.

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  • Commented on October 1, 2015 at 3:23 am

    Short pastas are my favorite!

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  • Commented on May 11, 2015 at 4:22 pm

    common sense, people!

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  • Commented on August 11, 2015 at 11:34 pm

    Five Seconds of Fear

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 3:01 pm

    It was good, not great, but good. It couldve been better. 3/5im the shadowy figure.

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  • Commented on December 11, 2015 at 7:50 pm

    Good pasta I would probably run and live with my grandparents.

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  • Commented on September 16, 2016 at 12:13 am

    So. I’m an idiot. Yes, I really am. In this situation, my idioticalness would probably telepathically turn on the lights and chuck me at the creature. Don’t ask why, but it would. I’d be dead.

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  • Commented on January 25, 2016 at 9:40 pm

    Most of the doors in my house don’t have locks and a couple of the ones that do don’t work properly. shiiiiiiiiiiiiit

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  • Commented on December 29, 2016 at 8:01 am

    It’s shadowcat

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 6:10 pm

    its so true…

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  • Commented on June 13, 2015 at 2:43 am

    Thank you for the advice… And that the reason I always lock my front door… I even leave people outside because its a habit of mine. I ALWAYS lock the door

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  • Meh
    Commented on August 30, 2015 at 1:42 pm

    Oh, well then, that would explain the feeling of fearI get that tells me to leave my door wide open and NOT WALK AROUND IN THE FREAKING DARKNESS

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  • Commented on September 24, 2015 at 8:55 am

    Makes sence I guess.

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  • Commented on January 14, 2016 at 5:16 pm

    dude no way

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  • Commented on April 7, 2016 at 11:39 am

    I’m afraid of the dark so I always turn on the ights before walking in. And why locks on the doors inside the house?

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  • Commented on May 27, 2016 at 12:42 pm

    A bit more explaining would be nice. Otherwise an amazing pasta.

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  • Commented on September 16, 2016 at 12:56 am

    Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Creeped me out a bit! 🙂
    5/5

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  • Commented on October 12, 2016 at 2:23 pm

    Well what if farted and my house blew up? And the figure died because of my stink.

    Other than that, this pasta was delicious.

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  • Commented on March 24, 2017 at 5:59 pm

    This is disturbing and short as fuck 10/10

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  • Commented on March 30, 2017 at 3:31 pm

    What if it came through the window

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  • Commented on April 3, 2017 at 12:19 am

    This happened before to me. I walked into my sibling’s room to pass through and go to the washroom that was attached to her bedroom. I look in and saw a shadowy figure. I just closed the door and walked to the downstairs bathroom, used the bathroom, and continued on with my homework xD No frick given.

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  • Commented on May 13, 2015 at 4:05 pm

    Very nice my friend

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  • Commented on May 29, 2015 at 1:29 am

    Very interesting and true

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  • Commented on June 20, 2015 at 2:52 am

    you have a point i like it but try to add more to it

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 5:00 pm

    Creepy

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