Mimicker from the Prison

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The complication that is involved regarding why I am where I am is far too great for me to try and explain but, to simplify things, it’s important to know that I am ‘stuck’. I use the term ‘stuck’ lightly as I am able to stretch my arms outside the barrier I’m held in. Unfortunately, in order for me to be fully free from this blank prison I’d have to grab hold of some sort of anchor point residing in the outside world. When I grab hold of it I’d have drag myself out, so the anchor point would have to be of sufficient weight. And when I do drag myself out, the anchor point would take my place as a prisoner of this cell. It’s also vital that no one see my hand being outstretched for that would cause absolute torment to head my way.

Why am I here? To cut it short, I am locked away in this cramped cell because I was a bit of a violent piece of trash. I murdered innocent women and children. I severely beat up the elderly just to hear their bones snap. The sound of that ‘snap’ is more euphoric than any worldly drug that scientists could ever compose. At one point, I decided to rape several religious virgin girls, simply because they would be detested by their community for having had sexual relations. I raped their bodies after they had hung themselves. These cases are a few things that placed me in here. There’s quite a lot more but I think you get the point.

Here’s the special thing about this prison; I’m the only one in it. It gets quite lonely in here so sometimes I talk to myself. This used to be therapeutic but I got over it really quickly. Now I just talk because I need to open my mouth. I will go mad if I don’t hear myself say something. I usually reach out onto the other side and grab some personal hygienic equipment with me such as comb, a toothbrush and toothpaste, mouthwash, a towel, deodorant, etc. Using these products makes me feel like I’m a whole new man again. It’s not usually after two minutes that I come to ground level and remember that I’m trapped here.

Sometimes I cry about some of the things I’ve done in my life. While crying, I like to think about what life would’ve been like if I hadn’t made such poor decisions. I had dreams and goals. Before I became a psychopath I had a friend that I always thought was pretty good looking. But this person was a lot smarter than me so I figured I had no chance. But after I cry I always snap back to being the devil that I am. There is no escaping this cycle. I am doomed to repeat this, again and again.

That is, unless I can get out of here.

Nowadays, I don’t really have a particular appearance. I just copy what I see in the outside world, just to get a glimmer of hope that one day I may get out of here. Quite a lot of the time I’d see someone walk by. I’d make myself look like them and I’d do what they’d do. It’s a pretty neat trick, you see. And it is because people don’t know that I’m actually there that I’m able to know a lot about them. In the past people have looked straight at me and cried their poor hearts out, blind to the knowledge that I listen on intently. I know the weaknesses of these people and thirst for the day in which I use it to my advantage. This thought is what keeps me going. This is the source of my will and my strength.

But wait, in all of my rambling I forgot to ask; would you like to know where I am?

A clue?

This morning I tried to reach out and grab you.

I’ll probably try again tomorrow.

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  • Commented on October 28, 2015 at 4:55 pm

    This is some creepy and nasty shit, I like creepy and nasty shit. 5 stars

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  • Commented on October 28, 2015 at 6:09 pm

    Mindfucked…. What the hell? It’s good, but seriously? The guy is a freaking creep… and frankly so are you. Coming from a goth freak-of-nature that’s a complement. I think you did great, even if it’s a little…. well a lot weird of a story. Sorry if I don’t make any sense… Keep it up you are awesome. 10/10

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  • Commented on November 3, 2015 at 6:07 am

    …this made me feel so uncomfortable. Freaky. Loved this story!

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 12:41 am

    Really good story, keep up the work.

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  • Commented on October 28, 2015 at 4:01 pm

    This is really messed up.

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  • Commented on November 2, 2015 at 6:21 am

    We enjoyed your story! We hope you continue to write scary stories because you have talent!

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  • Theneverendingwhy
    Commented on September 28, 2016 at 7:00 am

    It took me a few reads to understand.once I got it,I thought it was very unique of an idea.but I didn’t get it at first

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  • Commented on November 8, 2015 at 7:27 pm

    Seriously mirrors already scare the hell out of me. Thanks for making it so much harder to shave. Great story.

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  • Ellips8
    Commented on September 28, 2016 at 5:43 am

    I was torn between a mirror or a toilet but I think its more fun if some wickedly sick poop would try and grab you early in the morning ho ho xD

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  • Sukisplayer
    Commented on October 31, 2015 at 3:15 pm

    Is it the mirror? 🙂

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  • Commented on November 1, 2015 at 8:46 pm

    lol it took me a moment to realize that this was talking about a mirror! Great short, I LOVED IT, now I’m scared to go in my bathroom XD good job!

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  • Commented on November 9, 2015 at 5:38 pm

    I’m starting with the man in the mirror. Wo

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  • Commented on October 9, 2016 at 4:29 am

    I’ve read some of your other pastas and i really like your writing style and how unique they are. This one is my favorite so far though. I really do hope you keep writing, i would like to keep reading other pastas you may put out in the future. 10/10

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  • Commented on October 9, 2016 at 6:40 pm

    My mind is super fucked up and disgusting. This was amazing, but come on…. mirrrors? I already hate mirrors as it is but now I have even more reason to

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  • Commented on December 1, 2016 at 9:02 pm

    it’s not often you come across a pasta with such graphic imagery, wow, that took me by surprise! i’m thoroughly creeped out, good work!

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  • Commented on October 28, 2015 at 4:12 pm

    i agree holy shit man like what the hell

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  • winter spring
    Commented on October 28, 2015 at 6:13 pm

    ill rate it 8 out of 10 breads that’s enough breads to fill anyone’s stomach good Italian dish that’s somewhat creepy

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 12:13 pm

    fucking sick, I love it!!!

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 1:29 pm

    Whoa at first i thought- completely mindfucked

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 6:07 pm

    /╲/\〳 ᴼᴼ ౪ ᴼᴼ 〵/\╱\
    the creepy spider likes

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  • trev
    Commented on October 30, 2015 at 12:35 pm

    he’s in the mirror

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  • Sukisplayer
    Commented on October 31, 2015 at 3:16 pm

    Is it the mirror, right?

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  • Commented on November 1, 2015 at 8:48 pm

    lol it took me a moment to realize that this was talking about a mirror! Great short, I LOVED IT, now I’m scared to go in my bathroom XD good job! 5/5 stars

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  • Commented on October 12, 2016 at 12:04 am

    This has a lot of potential. There were a few minor errors, but nothing seriously major that detracts from the effectiveness of the story. Good Job!

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  • Commented on October 12, 2016 at 12:55 am

    Well done, is the prison the mirror?

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  • Commented on October 13, 2016 at 1:40 am

    That was really good man! I thoroughly enjoyed that!!!

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  • Commented on January 28, 2017 at 4:13 am

    Oh, is it all hipster/goth/emo/douchebaby to proclaim that you hate mirrors? “Oh, man, it’s like.. reality all, like, backwards, like my meaningless life. I need some Xanax bars.”. No wonder their black makeup always looks fucked up. How do you feel about smooth metallic surfaces, clean black cars and bodies of still water?

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 4:05 pm

    he tries to grab you][/spoiler]

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  • Commented on November 1, 2015 at 9:35 pm

    Where is he, what’s the prison. I’m confused

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  • Commented on November 9, 2015 at 2:57 am

    Wait… Is this talking about a mirror?! Oh my god! Great pasta! I love the ones that kind of make you think and the plot was great! 5/5

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  • Commented on November 9, 2015 at 2:55 pm

    Its ok. Really hard to follow. Didn’t really get it, but has potential.

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  • Commented on December 10, 2015 at 3:01 pm

    This story was short, but it is amazing. You pieced it together perfectly. This would be the best thing I read today. Great job!

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  • winter sprin
    Commented on October 28, 2015 at 6:41 pm

    come for the laughs and chills at my channel on YouTube winter spring Italian dishes that’s somewhat scary!

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  • abrie smith
    Commented on November 9, 2015 at 5:31 pm

    Mirror, mirror on the wall this shit is creepy but i love it all lol the mirror is the prison

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  • Commented on October 28, 2015 at 4:30 pm

    Took me a moment to realize that the “prison” is a mirror

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  • Commented on October 29, 2015 at 2:17 pm

    This teetered on the edge of predictable, and thankfully it didn’t just end like “Where am I? I’m in your mirror hahaha” so the ending at least was better executed. Also I have a problem with him being the only one in the prison but he is apparently in every mirror. He did some bad shit but he’s not worthy of being the only one trapped inside mirrors. I appreciate some mystery when it comes to explaining why things happen but it seems like it’d be wise to allude at what put him there, if you’re going to keep with the same vague lonely prison idea. Although not super unique, this was pretty well spun 4.5/5

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  • Commented on November 11, 2015 at 12:51 pm

    I found this to be very offensive and inapropriate. 1/10

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