My Love

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The day you left me is still clear in my mind. Why would you do this? You know I love you. We’re meant to be. We are destined to be together, the stars told me so. You used to love hearing that.

You shouldn’t have talked to that guy. I wouldn’t have gotten so angry if you had told me you wanted permission first. But you were never good at hiding things, were you? Like your house key. I mean, you put it under the welcome mat?

How cliche can you be? You’re lucky it was me that found it. You were safer that way. Well, until I found you and that prick sleeping together in OUR bed. It’s okay though. I’ve forgiven you. Not him though. I couldn’t forgive the man that tried to get in between us.

Now, I am sorry I got so mad. I admit I lost control. He didn’t deserve to lay beside you. You’re too good for him. The gods made you for me alone. He’s probably talking to them about it right now.

Don’t cry. You know how I hate that. He’s not worth your tears. What? Did you actually care about him? I can’t abide that. Nor the smell of his cheap cologne on you. It’s disgusting. Why would you lower yourself like that?

But its okay. I’m going to make it all better. You’re going to have to stay here a little while. Later tonight, we’ll leave this world together. It’ll be ok. After all, I love you. So just relax, it’ll be over soon.

I’m back, did you miss me? Ha. What a silly question. Of course you did. Why wouldn’t you? Now, now. Don’t be scared. I’ve decided we need to talk before anything happens. You need to understand a few things.

First of all, everything I did was for you. So even if you tried to report me to the authorities, they’ll know you were involved. See, I’ve been busy today. I used your phone to send myself several incriminating messages, and broke into your Facebook. That was way too easy babe. You should be more careful.

I also took the liberty of telling your family you were going on vacation. So no one is going to miss you. Who cares about them anyway? It’s just you and me. That’s all that matters.

Now, about this pickle we find ourselves in. Do you really want to continue on knowing you’re now an accomplice to murder? After all, the body is in your house. Plus, you left in a real rush to get out of town. Your whole family will know. Your friends.

Unless you choose to go with me. I’ll go clean everything, destroy your phone, and make sure we’re never found. Okay. Good. I knew you’d want to go with me. Close your eyes. I’m going to put you to sleep now. Don’t worry, its just a small sting. Then we’ll be together forever.

My love, my sweet everlasting love. I let your last breath blow hot against my skin. Your eyes glaze. It’s over for you, but not for me. I have to file a report with the authorities. Let them know you killed yourself in my basement when I told you I couldn’t keep quiet about you murdering your new boyfriend.

After all, I have a new girlfriend now.

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  • lucifer
    Commented on February 24, 2016 at 10:00 pm

    i thought it was pretty good

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  • Commented on February 24, 2016 at 7:41 pm

    eh it was okay i read a lot on here so my exspectations are high

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  • Commented on February 25, 2016 at 8:54 am

    Pretty good. Ex seems to be a very insightful murderer.

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  • Commented on February 28, 2016 at 9:56 pm

    Definitely not bad, I can say I wasn’t expecting it to end the way it did considering the main characters opinions throughout the story. I’d say well written and a decent story for this particular type of creepypasta.

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  • Commented on February 26, 2016 at 9:02 pm

    I thought this was pretty good. I liked the last line, a nice little twist in what was seeming to be a fairly straight forward murderer story.

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  • commandmurder
    Commented on March 2, 2016 at 4:16 pm

    i liked it in the end he had someone else got to me

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  • Hayden
    Commented on March 15, 2016 at 1:23 am

    That was awesome. That would make a great poem.

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  • jarvis
    Commented on May 17, 2016 at 6:41 pm

    I think when he said he has a new girlfriend, he was referring to the corpse of the unfaithful one.

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  • Commented on March 15, 2016 at 7:10 pm

    Awesome!

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  • abcd
    Commented on March 17, 2016 at 6:46 am

    good one!!!!!

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  • Commented on March 21, 2016 at 12:44 am

    Wow I never aspected at the
    End. I was amazing and please keep writing
    I hope I can have good grammer as
    Well

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  • Jessica
    Commented on April 3, 2016 at 11:40 am

    I loved it very how should I say that very creepy I love how he was so obsessed with his first gf enough to kill her than bam new girl shit…. 10/10 for me

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  • Commented on April 3, 2016 at 1:33 pm

    This was how should I say it this was one of the best ones I have read so far 10/10 from me I love the ending

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  • Commented on February 9, 2017 at 4:35 am

    I already left a comment about using your story. I hope it is okay? I will site author and link to this story. If you are not okay with it please get in contact with me!

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  • Commented on February 29, 2016 at 11:50 pm

    I-I loved it

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  • Commented on March 18, 2016 at 9:37 pm

    Absolutely love this!

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  • Commented on March 19, 2016 at 2:28 pm

    I mean, it’s ok. I don’t think the author truly understands when to make a new paragraph, though. There were many thoughts that continued through to a new paragraph.

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  • Commented on October 17, 2016 at 7:13 pm

    This was well-written and not cliche. And this was like a Yandere horror story.

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  • Commented on January 18, 2017 at 1:52 pm

    Hahhahah omy god there a yandere ha ha good story I really enjoyed reading this Bye keep writing.

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  • Commented on April 9, 2017 at 10:06 pm

    To the person requesting to use the story, please feel free to. You can email me at charlipitts1234@gmail.com. To the rest, thank you for your critique and compliments. I appreciate you.

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  • Commented on February 27, 2016 at 7:38 am

    Freshly narrated, for your listening pleasure.

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  • Commented on February 29, 2016 at 12:46 am

    Its not very suspenseful or anything, but I’m pretty desensitized. It was a good story, but the ending could use a little work, I’m not sure the importance of him saying he has a new girlfriend. The man seemed pretty obsessed with the last one, unless your going for this is a serial repeater, but that seems too untrue.

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  • PaleTheKiller
    Commented on March 1, 2016 at 2:38 pm

    So that was ….. wnespected?

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  • Commented on March 2, 2016 at 3:41 pm

    The story was good, it just needs minor improvements and it will be a better creepypasta.

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  • krystal jung
    Commented on March 5, 2016 at 11:49 pm

    this creepy pasta is very good for people to read on!**

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  • meimisaki66
    Commented on April 10, 2016 at 3:22 am

    so this guy kills his girl for cheating but he’s cheating on her himself?

    hypocrite…

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  • Commented on October 1, 2016 at 2:03 pm

    I love creepypastas like this

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  • Commented on November 24, 2016 at 11:23 am

    Wow….so the main character killed that man.. and then he killed his girlfriend
    That’s pretty awesome i like it

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  • Commented on February 27, 2016 at 5:57 am

    @ my ex

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  • AvidReader
    Commented on February 29, 2016 at 2:48 pm

    Story was well written, 3.5/5 from me good job

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  • Commented on March 16, 2016 at 9:31 pm

    This type of creepy wanna-be stalker boyfriend/ “if I can’t have you no one can” has been done to death now. The author made an attempt to switch things up a bit which I appreciate but this is tired and I want something new.

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