Silent Night

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I was enjoying the quiet until she started screaming.

As I lay on the cool, wet ground, my eyes staring blankly into the night sky, I tried to tell my wife to be quiet. She was disturbing the peace for myself and anyone else within ear shot. No matter how I tried though, her screams still streaked through the night air and made my ears hurt. I tried to sigh, realizing that my chest wouldn’t move as I did so. I could feel my eyes starting to dry out from being open so long and the blood oozing out of the hole in my skull, the heat from the freshly fired gun in my hand. It was weird not hearing my own heartbeat. The sound used to drown out her screams so effectively that I couldn’t even hear her. I think she was screaming for me, for what I did to myself not seconds before. She was a lovely creature, my wife, always concerned for my health and always fond working in the dirt. Now, in the quiet hush of the night, I could even hear her nails ripping as she tried to tear through the earth to get to me. I wanted her stop.

When she used all her oxygen, she would be silent soon enough.

Original Author: redtouch

16 Comments on 'Silent Night'

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  • Raven
    Commented on February 12, 2015 at 1:54 pm

    Oh this was a good one 😀 So he had a mental breakdown, buried his wife alive and then put a bullet in his brain.

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  • Commented on September 25, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    If I processed this correctly, the man buried his wife alive and shot himself in the head after?

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  • Commented on November 19, 2014 at 4:41 pm

    rekt

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  • Commented on January 24, 2015 at 9:57 pm

    This was poorly explained.

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  • Commented on April 10, 2015 at 6:23 pm

    im lost

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  • Commented on January 24, 2016 at 1:39 am

    I believe he buried his wife alive then shot himself

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  • AbbyTheHoe
    Commented on June 6, 2016 at 3:00 pm

    I think that the man shot himself in the head, and his wife found him and stated to scream? This is a good pasta, but it needs more information. I like the detail, though. 7/10

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  • Commented on September 9, 2016 at 12:24 am

    Das Some Alright Pasta Friend

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  • Commented on January 11, 2015 at 12:08 am

    I don’t understand. I get he killed himself but what’s going on with the wife?

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  • Commented on August 26, 2016 at 9:16 pm

    I do like this creepypasta purely because of the detail and mysterious matter of it in such a small pasta, it really does leave you thinking and having to read it a couple of times before realising what it actually is staying. 🙂

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  • Commented on September 19, 2016 at 3:00 pm

    im confused

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  • Commented on October 12, 2016 at 2:18 pm

    That last sentence made me realised what happened. Nice short story tho.

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  • Commented on June 18, 2015 at 4:41 am

    I was a bit lost with this one… More explanation would of done this pasta good. 6/10 breads.

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  • Commented on April 20, 2016 at 4:29 pm

    So, did he murder her, and then kill himself afterwards. The story needs a little more explaining.

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  • Commented on June 1, 2016 at 5:33 pm

    @shyschuy He buried her alive then shot himself

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  • Commented on July 9, 2015 at 3:19 pm

    lol

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