Fingers trembling with excitement I opened the package. Just as I had hoped, it was the camera I won on ebay. With mild delight I realized I had received a better deal than I had realized because the previous owner had left the memory card in the slot.

Before sending an e-mail to the seller alerting them of the mistake I decided to see if anything was on it. Setting the camera on slideshow I watched as the camera displayed a picture of a shipping label. My confusion turned to horror as the next image was of a person brutally murdered. The rest of the card was alternating pictures of a mailing address followed by a murder scene.

The last image was of the shipping label from the box I had just opened.

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  • Commented on October 11, 2013 at 10:37 pm

    Oh damn. That happy feeling didn’t last long. Poor lad.

    I like this ideea.

  • Commented on October 13, 2013 at 4:39 pm

    Wow. That…escalated quickly. Never read anything like this so far; I REALLY love the concept. Keep it up, fellow writer. :3

  • Commented on October 14, 2013 at 3:46 pm

    i no longer trust UPS or fedex ;-;

  • Commented on October 15, 2013 at 7:52 pm

    A terrifying, easy to remember pasta. I’ll be sure to tell my friends this one, when the time is right. >:D
    I like the way it ended. Sometimes less is more!

  • Commented on October 16, 2013 at 2:53 am

    And just like that I delete my ebay and amazon account.

  • Commented on November 2, 2013 at 1:16 am

    Is it just me or do I sense a fellow Whovian? The Doctor?

  • Commented on November 4, 2013 at 11:56 pm

    What’s the mailing address then? I wanted to know.

  • Commented on November 15, 2013 at 10:40 am

    I am not sure exactly how you got Whovian out of this, but I am. Though in retrospect, it does sorta feel like somethign the Doctor would discover at the beginning of an episode and go investigate.

  • Commented on March 31, 2014 at 10:53 pm

    *curl to fetal position! pull out gun! shoot computer*! I happen to be whovian, thefuq?

  • Commented on May 11, 2014 at 2:22 am

    Wow whovians! He he he! I loved it and it kinda reminded me of the doctor… kinda?

  • Commented on July 24, 2014 at 1:50 am

    Oh…hell…no…I hope the buyer is armed

  • Commented on December 5, 2014 at 4:22 pm

    yes you sense a fellow whovian but from the future by one year and one month

  • Commented on June 21, 2015 at 7:23 pm

    This is why I never buy things off of eBay

  • Commented on June 21, 2015 at 9:49 pm

    And, my Amazon account is deleted. 10/10 breads.

  • Commented on November 24, 2015 at 12:10 pm

    Well it was time to move to a new house anyway.

  • Commented on December 15, 2015 at 7:42 pm

    Good pasta I like the idea of it.

  • Commented on January 20, 2016 at 12:22 am

    Wish it was longer

  • Commented on February 3, 2016 at 3:57 pm

    Normally I don’t care for the shorter pastas (except for “Baby Doll”), but this one hits the nail over the head. Perfect 10/10 in my book. ;^)

  • Commented on February 22, 2016 at 12:39 am


  • Commented on February 29, 2016 at 6:01 pm

    Nice little story! good work.

  • Commented on April 7, 2016 at 11:56 am

    ‘mom why am I not allowed to buy things online?’
    ‘because, son, when your dad did he got killed’
    ‘mom stop being so overdramatic it’s just eBay .-.’

  • Ken
    Commented on December 8, 2016 at 10:03 pm

    A short film adaptation:

  • Commented on December 29, 2016 at 8:17 am

    That means… you’re next!

  • Commented on January 2, 2017 at 5:50 pm

    I think he could of added more don’t get it my one is fucking very incorrect

  • Commented on April 19, 2017 at 7:15 pm

    What if the next person that receives the camera is chum Norris

  • Commented on July 6, 2017 at 11:42 pm

    this is a favorite of mine your in a top 100 cp 5/5

  • Commented on August 23, 2017 at 6:16 pm

    Short and simple loved how it was different than most pastas.

  • YodaTheHuttYT
    Commented on September 26, 2017 at 5:18 pm

    Last time they bought anything off the internet…

  • Commented on September 26, 2017 at 5:18 pm

    Last time they ever bought something off the internet…

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