Fingers trembling with excitement I opened the package. Just as I had hoped, it was the camera I won on ebay. With mild delight I realized I had received a better deal than I had realized because the previous owner had left the memory card in the slot.
Before sending an e-mail to the seller alerting them of the mistake I decided to see if anything was on it. Setting the camera on slideshow I watched as the camera displayed a picture of a shipping label. My confusion turned to horror as the next image was of a person brutally murdered. The rest of the card was alternating pictures of a mailing address followed by a murder scene.
The last image was of the shipping label from the box I had just opened.
29 Comments on 'Slideshow'
Oh damn. That happy feeling didn’t last long. Poor lad.
I like this ideea.
Wow. That…escalated quickly. Never read anything like this so far; I REALLY love the concept. Keep it up, fellow writer. :3
i no longer trust UPS or fedex ;-;
A terrifying, easy to remember pasta. I’ll be sure to tell my friends this one, when the time is right. >:D
I like the way it ended. Sometimes less is more!
And just like that I delete my ebay and amazon account.
Is it just me or do I sense a fellow Whovian? The Doctor?
What’s the mailing address then? I wanted to know.
I am not sure exactly how you got Whovian out of this, but I am. Though in retrospect, it does sorta feel like somethign the Doctor would discover at the beginning of an episode and go investigate.
*curl to fetal position! pull out gun! shoot computer*! I happen to be whovian, thefuq?
Wow whovians! He he he! I loved it and it kinda reminded me of the doctor… kinda?
Oh…hell…no…I hope the buyer is armed
yes you sense a fellow whovian but from the future by one year and one month
This is why I never buy things off of eBay
And, my Amazon account is deleted. 10/10 breads.
Well it was time to move to a new house anyway.
Good pasta I like the idea of it.
Wish it was longer
Normally I don’t care for the shorter pastas (except for “Baby Doll”), but this one hits the nail over the head. Perfect 10/10 in my book. ;^)
Okay…
Nice little story! good work.
‘mom why am I not allowed to buy things online?’
‘because, son, when your dad did he got killed’
‘mom stop being so overdramatic it’s just eBay .-.’
A short film adaptation:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjsEiglAl4s
That means… you’re next!
I think he could of added more don’t get it my one is fucking very incorrect
What if the next person that receives the camera is chum Norris
this is a favorite of mine your in a top 100 cp 5/5
Short and simple loved how it was different than most pastas.
Last time they bought anything off the internet…
Last time they ever bought something off the internet…