“Tag”

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She made a playful squeal as I tagged her. It was clear she was enjoying herself, she was laughing herself to tears. “Daddy, stop it, my sides hurt!” She continued to laugh. Her joy was contagious, I smiled, for once in years, I smiled. I dare say I’ve smiled more that day than I have in my entire life. Alas, all good things must come to an end, she was tired, and fell asleep shortly after.
My wife soon came home. She was so glad to see me, she yelled my name, again, laughing to tears. She hugged me, still laughing. I continued to smile. She looked down and saw my tagging tool, quickly shooting her focus back to my eyes. I continued to smile. “Michael…” Tears continued to stream down her face in excitement. “How could you have done this to our little angel?” She tried to run, but she was too slow. “Tag…” I smiled wider. “You’re it.”

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  • Commented on July 27, 2014 at 10:04 am

    plot twist, he had knife.

    mystery solved.

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  • Commented on October 7, 2014 at 5:15 pm

    so when he said they were laughing to tears they were actually crying and when the mom hugged him she was actually trying to pull him back……..the girl didn’t squeal she screamed and the mom was screaming his name for him to stop……holy shit

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  • Commented on November 1, 2014 at 9:08 pm

    nice story

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  • Commented on November 19, 2014 at 12:57 pm

    Amazing ending! Just like shoveing Mike into the suits!

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  • Commented on August 29, 2014 at 11:58 pm

    I think this story was pretty good.

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  • Commented on December 10, 2014 at 8:34 pm

    Amazing — love the way the meaning was disguised in happiness! :)

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  • Commented on January 8, 2015 at 4:35 pm

    Wow, that escalated quickly

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  • Commented on January 7, 2015 at 11:17 pm

    Intense plot twist that makes this all so intriguing.

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  • Commented on August 3, 2014 at 6:14 am

    Good story…

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  • CreepsMcShockley
    Commented on December 7, 2014 at 10:02 pm

    I wish the shorties were all this good!

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  • Commented on December 18, 2014 at 12:08 am

    It was short, sweet and creepy. It did the job!

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  • Commented on January 13, 2015 at 3:54 am

    Amazing and very well written

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  • Commented on January 14, 2015 at 4:20 pm

    Quite a twist, that’s apparently about all I have to say.

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  • Commented on January 16, 2015 at 6:13 pm

    Plot twist!

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  • Commented on March 24, 2015 at 6:10 pm

    I like it! Short, but to the point ^-^

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  • Commented on August 26, 2014 at 1:50 am

    Well this was interesting

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  • PinkCrow
    Commented on January 27, 2015 at 1:04 pm

    Luvit!

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  • Commented on February 18, 2015 at 1:08 pm

    Oh my gosh. A knife. Absolutely amazing.

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  • Commented on February 19, 2015 at 2:38 am

    That plot twist though. 5/5

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  • Commented on February 23, 2015 at 3:34 pm

    I honestly thought that this was a happy pasta but the twist at the end was well done!

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  • Commented on February 26, 2015 at 12:09 pm

    Good story

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  • Commented on February 28, 2015 at 7:52 pm

    Genius!

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  • Commented on March 13, 2015 at 2:56 pm

    I thought it was a well thought out CreepyPasta post, good work man!

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  • Commented on March 24, 2015 at 6:51 pm

    Great Pasta. 5/5. I liked out you used the “tagging tool” and the laughter as a disguise for torture and knives.

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  • Commented on March 27, 2015 at 1:08 am

    that was pretty cool

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  • Commented on April 1, 2015 at 11:26 am

    This is great short but really interesting…..I liked it so much!

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  • Commented on April 7, 2015 at 12:42 pm

    I absolutely love this story. Because you sugar coated the story’s true meaning, and at the end showed us that what looked like an innocent story, turned out to be more sinister. Very good story, well done! :D

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  • Commented on April 8, 2015 at 3:43 pm

    This is one of those “Criminal Happiness” stories. I absolutely love these because it adds to how insane these type of people are. If you ever go to youtube, search up “Meet the Pyro”, and it’s an exact example of what I mean by Criminal Happiness. What he thinks he is doing is good, but in reality, he doesn’t realize he’s ending innocent lives. 4/5

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  • Commented on April 10, 2015 at 3:00 am

    Makes me think of Stephen King and H. P. Lovecraft with the whole plot twist.

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  • Mim
    Commented on April 10, 2015 at 11:08 am

    10/10 this is amazing

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  • Commented on April 10, 2015 at 5:56 pm

    i have question for you did you mean an actual tagging tool used on animals because its been known the bottom on a tagging tool can easly be broken off to kill a person and most known to be easyier by going for the ribs

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  • Commented on April 10, 2015 at 8:53 pm

    Creepy story. An awesome thing to achieve in such a short story. Congrats. 4/5

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  • Commented on March 11, 2015 at 5:54 pm

    I enjoyed this one. Short and sweet and a cool idea of a twist. Good work. 3/5

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  • Commented on April 1, 2015 at 11:15 pm

    I didn’t like it. To me, the kill too easy.

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