She made a playful squeal as I tagged her. It was clear she was enjoying herself, she was laughing herself to tears. “Daddy, stop it, my sides hurt!” She continued to laugh. Her joy was contagious, I smiled, for once in years, I smiled. I dare say I’ve smiled more that day than I have in my entire life. Alas, all good things must come to an end, she was tired, and fell asleep shortly after.
My wife soon came home. She was so glad to see me, she yelled my name, again, laughing to tears. She hugged me, still laughing. I continued to smile. She looked down and saw my tagging tool, quickly shooting her focus back to my eyes. I continued to smile. “Michael…” Tears continued to stream down her face in excitement. “How could you have done this to our little angel?” She tried to run, but she was too slow. “Tag…” I smiled wider. “You’re it.”
“Tag”
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plot twist, he had knife.
mystery solved.
Good story…
Well this was interesting
I think this story was pretty good.
so when he said they were laughing to tears they were actually crying and when the mom hugged him she was actually trying to pull him back……..the girl didn’t squeal she screamed and the mom was screaming his name for him to stop……holy shit
nice story
Amazing ending! Just like shoveing Mike into the suits!
I wish the shorties were all this good!
Amazing — love the way the meaning was disguised in happiness! 🙂
It was short, sweet and creepy. It did the job!
Intense plot twist that makes this all so intriguing.
Wow, that escalated quickly
Amazing and very well written
Quite a twist, that’s apparently about all I have to say.
Plot twist!
Luvit!
Oh my gosh. A knife. Absolutely amazing.
That plot twist though. 5/5
I honestly thought that this was a happy pasta but the twist at the end was well done!
Good story
Genius!
I enjoyed this one. Short and sweet and a cool idea of a twist. Good work. 3/5
I thought it was a well thought out CreepyPasta post, good work man!
I like it! Short, but to the point ^-^
Great Pasta. 5/5. I liked out you used the “tagging tool” and the laughter as a disguise for torture and knives.
that was pretty cool
This is great short but really interesting…..I liked it so much!
I didn’t like it. To me, the kill too easy.
I absolutely love this story. Because you sugar coated the story’s true meaning, and at the end showed us that what looked like an innocent story, turned out to be more sinister. Very good story, well done! 😀
This is one of those “Criminal Happiness” stories. I absolutely love these because it adds to how insane these type of people are. If you ever go to youtube, search up “Meet the Pyro”, and it’s an exact example of what I mean by Criminal Happiness. What he thinks he is doing is good, but in reality, he doesn’t realize he’s ending innocent lives. 4/5
Makes me think of Stephen King and H. P. Lovecraft with the whole plot twist.
10/10 this is amazing
i have question for you did you mean an actual tagging tool used on animals because its been known the bottom on a tagging tool can easly be broken off to kill a person and most known to be easyier by going for the ribs
Creepy story. An awesome thing to achieve in such a short story. Congrats. 4/5
I quite thoughly enjoyed it i love how the fact that he was killing them was left a mystery till the end of the story
This could have been better if the father found the crying of the child funny.
Well … that was not what i was expecting 5/5
Wow this was amazing, I really was not expecting that.
well.. then X_X that escalated quickly, and was unbelievably twisted… i wish i did that good
It must have been Opposite day. xD
woah. :O What a turn of events.
Pretty good short story. Could have more action to it. Like making the kill less easy and more like a chase or something like that.
I LOVEEEEEEEE THIS!! so simple short and sweet. Ive read it over 5 times at least so far….great to get adrenalin going…….classic already to me
reminds me of the dark knight. how joker killed people. mentally psycotic behaviour by the person who would do this kind of thing. i loved it. twisted and brutally awesome
hooooolllllyyyyy shhhiiiittt… wow i did not expect that
The twist was really good i liked it 5/5
omg i have read this so many times. it is just amazing
Well that blows… good story though….
Took a small wile for me to get what was going on. So the father’s “tagging tool” was a knife and this story reversed everything that is in a murder story.
The daughter ran as quickly as she could as her father chased her. Her legs grew weak and she tripped and her father quickly caught up with her and she could see him holding a knife. Before she could say anything her father stabbed her in her side and she began to cry and sob pleading with her father. The mother soon arrived seeing the father stabbing there child she pleaded with him to stop and he went after her as well. In the end the father ends up killing the mother as well.
I am amazed that someone thought of this it was perfect and consisted of all perfect qualities a pasta can have! 10/10
I don’t think this guy knows how to play tag… anyways, it was a really good story.
Sounds like a violent rape to me. “tagging tool”
holy cow!!!! this is a good plot twist!!! i like it XD
This was a really good short Creepypasta!
I absolutely love the plot twist and the way everything was set up. I hope the author keeps writing, and that he (and others) can put this quality of twist into longer pastas.
Meh… didn’t really like it. :p
Meh… didn’t like it. :p
Eh, a bit creepy. That’s it.
I was wrong, I liked it. I was lying. ; o ;
i was not expecting that. I thought that it would turn out his daughter was dead or something. 9.7/10
Wow. It’s so amazing how someone can get such creepiness into such a short story and keeping the gore factor low.
This was actually really good, it is short which I like because I really can’t be bothered to read much but that was actually good!
y was the little girl laughing
maby she was crying and the dad was coco balls so he heard her laughing
Well .. Wasn’t that beautiful ..
Did a reading for this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G-9eoMRfMd8
That was very well done, keep it up!
i did not expect that plot twist .-.
I love it
Great twist in the ending and the way you disguise things with happiness is brilliant.
Oh wow, gotta love a good plot twist. Interesting way to tell the story from the father’s mind though, him taking their pleads to be spared as fun and games. Whoever wrote it should be proud~.
Lol my name is Michael
well that was totally not expected 100 out of 100 cookie cats
Very unique. Though, i did expect that type of twist to happen.
Crazy twist. That was short but pretty good
…..tag
Wow, what a great ending, I really liked this one, it was scary, short, and sweet, 5 thumbs up!
5/5!!!! short and simple, i like it. ^_^
I rate this 9001/9000 and you know what that means…. IT’S OVER 9000!!!!!!
it was pretty creepy.The tagging tool though 10/10
this is just a dad and his kid playing tag…nothing more to it, y’all are making it worse by using ur imagination to make it “scary”
Wow did not expect that
Wow! Haha, I didn’t see that one coming either; great story so much was told in such a little space. 10/10 I just can’t get enough of stories like this, twists are my favs!
He killed them. Fucker!
Great twist
Not that bad
this creepy pasta creeped me out. It was a great pasta keep up the good workplot twist he had a knife
Oh, I bet she was laughing and crying her ‘guts’ off…lol i’m lame
I wasent thinking knife…………. 0/////0
The whole time I was thinking “So, he’s spray painting his name on them?” ..I’m slow.
I found this kind of funny
Total mindfucker
that was quite spooky
Pretty nice stroy.
The best Pasta I have probably ever read, leaving Jeff The Killer! It’s impossible to impress me with stories but YOU did it, Gratz!
What the author actually meant:
She made a horrifying squeal as I stabbed her. It was clear she was having a painful experience, she was screaming herself to tears. “Daddy, stop it, my sides hurt!”, she continued to scream. Her pain was contagious, I smiled, for once in years. I dare say I’ve smiled more that day that I have in my entire life. Alas, all bad things (‘bad things’ here refer to his daughter) must come to an end, she was tired, and collapsed shortly. My wife soon came home, She was terrified to see me, she yelled my name, again and again, screaming to tears. She squeezed me, still screaming. I continued to smile. She looked down and saw my stabbing tool, the knife, quickly shooting her focus back to my eyes. I continued to smile. “Michael…”, tears continued to stream down her face in pain. “How could you have done this to our little angel?”. She tried to run, but she was too slow. “Stab…”, I smile wider, “You’re it!”.
Wow the tag mindfuck describes this perfectly.
i loved this one. i would’ve never guessed he a knife.
This was interesting. It escalated quickly. I give it a 9/10.
but who is tool
That was a very good story
It’s sad but I love how he uses the word tag and thinks of it as a game.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6deG3M3C4Yo
uhh excuse me do u wanna run that by me again talk about a demented way to play tag….i love it!
Oh Shit! I read it before last year and I didn’t understand… Now I do
I seriously thought they were laughing ;_;
So she fell ‘asleep’ huh?
I liked it. I showed my friends the story and they were speechless. To me if my friends are that way or i’m that way its a hella good pasta 5/5 good job
WOW I loved it amazing!!!!!!!!
omg one of the best creepypasta ever when he said they were laughing to tears they were actually crying and when the mom hugged him she was actually trying to pull him back the girl didn’t squeal she screamed and the mom was screaming his name for him to stop
Great story but the kills could have been more….challenging >:)
Haha, nice twist. I got confused at first, but I get it now. Short but simple. And a touch of insanity. Just what we all need. Sometimes the simpler stories are equally as decrepit as the long, insanely endless tales. This one was especially creepy, considering the mother doesn’t exactly worry about her child continuously stabbed by her father. They’re all mad. Well done on this.
Wow! I’m posting this on my site:)
She made a playful scream as I stabbed her. It was clear she scared herself, she was screaming herself to tears. “Daddy, stop it, my sides hurt, stop stabbing me!!!” She continued to scream. Her joy was contagious, I smiled, for once in years, I smiled. I dare say I’ve smiled more that day than I have in my entire life. Alas, all good things must come to an end, she was tired, and died shortly after.
My wife soon came home. She was so horrid to see me, she yelled my name, again, screaming to tears. She hugged me, still screaming. I continued to smile. She looked down and saw my Knife, quickly shooting her focus back to my eyes. I continued to smile. “Michael…” Tears continued to stream down her face in sadness. “How could you have done this to our little angel?” She tried to run, but she was too slow. “Tag…” I smiled wider. “You’re it.” He stabbed the wife and killed her. PLOT TWIST. Also Spoiler.
holey shit! lol! i really liked this. at first i was wondering y this was a cp, then the ending was really cool.
i think the tag tool was a knife or a sharp object
Great pasta makes my side hurt a little.
Hats off to u…
Well then…….
This was such a well thought out ending. I really enjoyed the complexity and wall it builds around a reader in just 30 seconds and last only 30 seconds. It shows the mind of how a killer works. Very nice and relaxed story.
I rate it: 8/10 (I felt like in the middle you jumped to far ahead, that got me confused. But for the rest great short store
the ending/twist was kinda obvious (at least for me) but still a great story and creepy.
Loved it plot twist and all
Loved the play on perception it really spiced up the pasta for me! ( and i love my pastas spicey)
Wtf?!?!
This is an amazing pasta.
Ouch, the feels. This is a good one.
My mind is officially fuckrd
Glad i’m a guy and hes not my dad.
i read this three times thinking i missed something that lead up to the plot twist, but i didn’t. this is either an open ended story left up to the reader to decide what this actually means OR a disguise for something evil. idk it was ok.
I come tell loved this pasta I look toward to reading more of your stories
Short but sweet. I like it!
9/10
Good Choice of words in the story. I was hooked right from the start GOOD WORK 🙂
Yeah.. This is definately mindfuck.
I like how you used his twisted perception of the truth in this story. 10/10
I love the plot twist at the end. I figured the little girl was going to be the killer, but then BAM! Dad has a knife and pop goes the weasel. Brilliant and sharp, my man. keep it up 🙂
It’s great, it’s getting better, and THERE THEY ALL DIED!
Well, that escalated quickly.
Awesome story. It’s short but it was still gruesomely awesome. xD
The poor little girl. When she“fell asleep” she actually died! Very imaginative in a dark and twisted way. 10/10!
Nice one there, despite being that short,i actually enjoyed it.
This story was insanity hidden in happiness. It is really great. If someone doesnt know, his tagging tool is a knife. Now it reveals what it all means. Good job. Wonderful pasta
DANG!! That guy must be insane Short story but one short story can tell A LOT just figured that out u learn something everyday but that,That Is not normal.
Aye batman4401 got to ask u a question why do u think it is called CREEPPASTA!
Loved the twist at the end. Definitely screws with my childhood memories of playing tag…
“Daddy, stop it, my sides hurt!” . . . Damn. . . .
[I wonder what his tagging tool is][/spoiler]
Ha Ha,…. well now, you’re it….
That was really creepy. despite it’s shortness, though, it was really well written. I liked the story idea. Write another one like this, Pablo! XD
Oh man! That ending though… 5/5! Perfect! Realistic!
Amazing! Great job showing the change of emotion so quickly. Definitely one of my favorites.
I read this at lunch and its a plot twist he has knife great story please write more. i hope you make graet storys
The story is really good at making it seem innocent. Don’t stop writing!
This is art. The way this is worded makes it sound almost poetic.
Nice plot twist!
I thought the plot twist was cool and I didn’t think it was a bad story. 🙂
Wow really good job expect this on my channel, DemiTheDope
Realy Good Story! I’m going to read it at my channel DemiTheDope on YT ( YouTube )
My Channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkQLm8Z7FTvkra8k4EGbTCg
Pretty cool I liked it, I wrote a story myself at the moments its pending so I’ll drop a link here.
http://www.creepypasta.org/pending/violetta
oh dayum
this was awesome
“tagging tool”………..NOPE
well that escalated quickly
Wow. I thought the mom had been crazy to.
tag your it*tags my friend*oh he went to sleep oh well
Well then. That was….Interesting.
Loved it, Short and sweet.
The ending is really the cherry on top that makes a really goodie.
It’s one of those stories that mess with you. I love how easily it turns from fun to wrong…
Looking forward to more from this writer!
This was a really good pasta…
Innocense, anxiety, anger, happiness, joy, sadness and pain.
I like it.
Wow…deep.
The ending so awesome…
Great! 10/10
That was better than most long ones 😀
can i put this on my website? i will give credit.
JEEZ! I just looked up tagging tool on da web and it’s pretty obvious why this is scary.
Nice twist starts happy then got really dark
Whoa… That plot twist got me so hard right there! Well done! I love how you blanketed the true meaning with joy!
unexpected
The beat dropped faster then my grandma without life support.
You are so skinny that you can wipe your ass with dental floss
You mom is like a library, she is always open to the public
Wasn’t really a mindfuck….so, someone get this out of here.
UNEXPECTED!!!!!!!! TWIST ENDING!!!!!!!
Haha The funny thing is, I of course, came here for a scary story, and was just like “oh this is a super sweet story about a guy playing tag with his daughter, that’s awesome.”
And then… death.
what dua…….
This is a really well made short. You dun good my dude. Very clever.
I absolutely loved this.
I didn’t get it. It confused me. Still gave it five stars after I read it again.
Tag, you’re dead~ Tag~ Tag, you’re dead~
Wait, you left out something.
there should of been a beginning…
okay… I am going to express my feelings on this in one sentence: WAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yaass i luv this story its super short but…….. VIOLENT! and an AMAZING! plot twist!
that was really cool, and super creative, but i would’ve enjoyed it more if there was more detail. 4/5
perfect short!!!!
I loved it soooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
I loved it soooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️Best creepy pasta ever
The best creepy pasta I’ve ever read I’m my entire life!!!!!
Wow, this is my favourite kind of story. Short with a terrifying and mind blowing plot twist. Loved it <3
The story is average at best but the thing is why did the father stab and most likely killed his wife and kids?
4/10
Short but awesome.
It’s a nice plot twist, but the story seems a little bit two short. Nice story, though.
Delicious pasta! 9/10
At first i thought the father raped his daughter till i reached the endNot that he killed he
loved it
That was just a happy story
The ending wasn’t even a real plot twist
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pretty twisted! A few grammar issues, but altogether a well done little story!
I liked it. Nice job!
Wicked!
I believe the “Tag tool” was a hypodermic needle containing Seconal (or another peaceful, off to sleep death drug).
Shitty promotion
Its a tough one
I love this so much the kill is a little easy n this could have used a little more detail but other than that i love how it is hiding behind the mask of happiness awesome pasta good job 10/10
Wait so he started to stab her and than that…
WOW that was really good! Nice plot twist! The knife.. just WOW
9 and 1/2 out of ten!
Wow omg, accidently read this in class!! out loud!! my techer has had a heart attacl! IT WAS TOO SCARY!!!! OMG!!! #SCARY!!!! #HORROR!!! #SCARYHORROR!!! #HORRORSCARY!!1 uh oh…stinky!!!! UH OH!!!!