In June 1972, a woman appeared in Cedar Senai hospital in Los Angeles, California in nothing but a white, blood-covered gown. Now this, in itself, should not be too surprising as people often have accidents nearby and come to the nearest hospital for medical attention, but there were two things that caused people who saw her to vomit and flee in terror.
The first being that she wasn’t exactly human. she resembled something close to a mannequin, but had the dexterity and fluidity of a normal human being. Her face, was as flawless as a mannequins, devoid of eyebrows and smeared in make-up.
There was a kitten clamped in her jaws so unnaturally tight that no teeth could be seen, and the blood was still squirting out over her gown and onto the floor. She then pulled it out of her mouth, tossed it aside and collapsed.
From the moment she stepped through the entrance to when she was taken to a hospital room and cleaned up before being prepped for sedation, she was completely calm, expressionless and motionless. The doctors thought it best to restrain her until the authorities could arrive and she did not protest. They were unable to get any kind of response from her and most staff members felt too uncomfortable to look directly at her for more than a few seconds.
But the second the staff tried to sedate her, she fought back with extreme force. Two members of staff had to hold her down as her body rose up on the bed with that same, blank expression.
She turned her emotionless eyes towards the male doctor and did something unusual. She smiled.
As she did, the female doctor screamed and let go out of shock. In the woman’s mouth were not human teeth, but long, sharp spikes. Too long for her mouth to close fully without causing any damage…
The male doctor stared back at her for a moment before asking “What in the hell are you?”
She cracked her neck down to her shoulder to observe him, still smiling.
There was a long pause, the security had been alerted and could be heard coming down the hallway.
As he heard them approach, she darted forward, sinking her teeth into the front of his throat, ripping out his jugular and letting him fall to the floor, gasping for air as he choked on his own blood.
She stood up and leaned over him, her face coming dangerously close to his as the life faded from his eyes.
She leaned closer and whispered in his ear.
The doctor’s eyes filled with fear as he watched her calmly walk away to greet the security men. His last ever sight would be watching her feast on them one by one.
The female doctor who survived the incident named her “The Expressionless”.
There was never a sighting of her again.
27 Comments on 'The Expressionless'
This is really creepy.
The whole i am god thing is a lil played out…but other than that awesome.
FAIL. Maybe a creepy ass voice would have been scarier or even a little more detail
Please note that I believe this individual to be the original writer of the pasta. It is listed as unknown, so I wanted to make sure the author got credit in the comments.
This is downright odd. I love it though…Does that make me odd?
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I really liked all of it, apart from the whole “I am God”…that just made no sense to me really. I am an atheist too, but even so, some stories makes sense with a higher being as the “monster” but this one…no.
She probably isn’t actually God, you guys.. You can untwist your undies now.
Probably just wanted to ruin the Doctor’s final moments by making him fear what waited for him after death.
He’s good though, just rotting in the ground like dead things do.
I agree with Shinra about the fact that she probably wanted him to fear what awaited him when he died.I thought this was a pretty good story,I was able to imagine it good enough :3 Well done Expressionless,tasty pasta! c;
No no no no no no no no no no no she is definitely disturbing and and I would not want to meet her (the eleven no’s is from the Blue Öyster Cult song Joan Crawford).
Whether she is really God or not the whole I am God thing is still played out and cliche. But other than that I thought this was actually pretty good.
“Her face, was as flawless as a mannequins, devoid of eyebrows and smeared in make-up.” Sounds like most girls.
awesome i love the ending
It started out really good, but would’ve been better if you left her human. Human women aren’t supposed to walk around with dead kittens in their mouths. The unexpected and unusual is what really makes a story scary. It’s normal for a monster with long, sharp teeth to bite people.
I mentally groaned when I learned she was wearing a white gown. I don’t really understand why this appears in stories and movies so much. Aside from that, I also think that it would have been more interesting if you left her human. I actually like the ‘I am God’ line. It was creepy for me. I also liked how she only killed males (as far as we know). It gave her a potential and mysterious background. Weird story. Keep writing and improving.
I like how the author made her seem so cold and unattached .made her being a monster realistic
I couldn’t get past all the medical errors.
Oh shit, the ad says sourcing mannequins on Alibaba. WTF?!
I have to agree with some of the comments above about how cliche’d the whole “I am God” thing was.
But at least it didnt flow into pure meme territory and she shouted “I am John Cena” before delivering the five knuckle shuffle on the doctor.
Dude seriously? This pasta’s on like a dozen other sites already.
Now this is scary…
This was a great pasta. REALLY good narrative skills person!
It’s just a crappypasta. Nothing creepy at all!
Although the “I…am…..god” twist was ridiculous, the story itself was really good and is very damn unsettling to read.
I think I’ve submitted this before!
WAH!!IT IS SO CREPPY