The Expressionless


In June 1972, a woman appeared in Cedar Senai hospital in Los Angeles, California in nothing but a white, blood-covered gown. Now this, in itself, should not be too surprising as people often have accidents nearby and come to the nearest hospital for medical attention, but there were two things that caused people who saw her to vomit and flee in terror.
The first being that she wasn’t exactly human. she resembled something close to a mannequin, but had the dexterity and fluidity of a normal human being. Her face, was as flawless as a mannequins, devoid of eyebrows and smeared in make-up.

There was a kitten clamped in her jaws so unnaturally tight that no teeth could be seen, and the blood was still squirting out over her gown and onto the floor. She then pulled it out of her mouth, tossed it aside and collapsed.

From the moment she stepped through the entrance to when she was taken to a hospital room and cleaned up before being prepped for sedation, she was completely calm, expressionless and motionless. The doctors thought it best to restrain her until the authorities could arrive and she did not protest. They were unable to get any kind of response from her and most staff members felt too uncomfortable to look directly at her for more than a few seconds.

But the second the staff tried to sedate her, she fought back with extreme force. Two members of staff had to hold her down as her body rose up on the bed with that same, blank expression.

She turned her emotionless eyes towards the male doctor and did something unusual. She smiled.

As she did, the female doctor screamed and let go out of shock. In the woman’s mouth were not human teeth, but long, sharp spikes. Too long for her mouth to close fully without causing any damage…

The male doctor stared back at her for a moment before asking “What in the hell are you?”

She cracked her neck down to her shoulder to observe him, still smiling.

There was a long pause, the security had been alerted and could be heard coming down the hallway.

As he heard them approach, she darted forward, sinking her teeth into the front of his throat, ripping out his jugular and letting him fall to the floor, gasping for air as he choked on his own blood.

She stood up and leaned over him, her face coming dangerously close to his as the life faded from his eyes.

She leaned closer and whispered in his ear.


The doctor’s eyes filled with fear as he watched her calmly walk away to greet the security men. His last ever sight would be watching her feast on them one by one.

The female doctor who survived the incident named her “The Expressionless”.

There was never a sighting of her again.

Original Author: Unknown

27 Comments on 'The Expressionless'

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  • Commented on August 22, 2013 at 1:03 pm

    This is really creepy.

  • Commented on August 22, 2013 at 1:18 pm

    The whole i am god thing is a lil played out…but other than that awesome.

  • Commented on August 23, 2013 at 12:50 am

    FAIL. Maybe a creepy ass voice would have been scarier or even a little more detail

  • Commented on August 29, 2013 at 9:35 pm

    Please note that I believe this individual to be the original writer of the pasta. It is listed as unknown, so I wanted to make sure the author got credit in the comments.

  • Commented on December 4, 2013 at 4:56 am

    This is downright odd. I love it though…Does that make me odd?

  • Commented on January 28, 2014 at 2:16 am

    Hey guys i just made a youtube account, and I am doing creepypasta videos. I just made my video on this one so if you liked it, then you will like the video.

  • Commented on March 2, 2014 at 11:11 am

    I really liked all of it, apart from the whole “I am God”…that just made no sense to me really. I am an atheist too, but even so, some stories makes sense with a higher being as the “monster” but this one…no.

  • Commented on June 19, 2014 at 6:14 am

    She probably isn’t actually God, you guys.. You can untwist your undies now.
    Probably just wanted to ruin the Doctor’s final moments by making him fear what waited for him after death.
    He’s good though, just rotting in the ground like dead things do.

  • Commented on July 5, 2014 at 9:34 pm

    I agree with Shinra about the fact that she probably wanted him to fear what awaited him when he died.I thought this was a pretty good story,I was able to imagine it good enough :3 Well done Expressionless,tasty pasta! c;

  • Commented on August 14, 2014 at 3:54 am

    No no no no no no no no no no no she is definitely disturbing and and I would not want to meet her (the eleven no’s is from the Blue Öyster Cult song Joan Crawford).

  • Commented on March 4, 2015 at 10:38 pm

    Whether she is really God or not the whole I am God thing is still played out and cliche. But other than that I thought this was actually pretty good.

  • Emma
    Commented on April 5, 2015 at 10:12 pm

    “Her face, was as flawless as a mannequins, devoid of eyebrows and smeared in make-up.” Sounds like most girls.

  • :-)
    Commented on May 4, 2015 at 3:01 pm

    awesome i love the ending

  • Commented on June 26, 2015 at 4:51 am

    It started out really good, but would’ve been better if you left her human. Human women aren’t supposed to walk around with dead kittens in their mouths. The unexpected and unusual is what really makes a story scary. It’s normal for a monster with long, sharp teeth to bite people.

  • Commented on July 20, 2015 at 4:56 am

    I mentally groaned when I learned she was wearing a white gown. I don’t really understand why this appears in stories and movies so much. Aside from that, I also think that it would have been more interesting if you left her human. I actually like the ‘I am God’ line. It was creepy for me. I also liked how she only killed males (as far as we know). It gave her a potential and mysterious background. Weird story. Keep writing and improving.

  • Commented on July 23, 2015 at 11:42 pm

    I like how the author made her seem so cold and unattached .made her being a monster realistic

  • Jao
    Commented on September 13, 2015 at 8:24 am

    I couldn’t get past all the medical errors.

  • Commented on November 2, 2015 at 8:40 am

    Oh shit, the ad says sourcing mannequins on Alibaba. WTF?!

  • Commented on January 5, 2016 at 4:58 pm

    I have to agree with some of the comments above about how cliche’d the whole “I am God” thing was.

    But at least it didnt flow into pure meme territory and she shouted “I am John Cena” before delivering the five knuckle shuffle on the doctor.

  • Commented on June 23, 2016 at 2:51 pm

    Dude seriously? This pasta’s on like a dozen other sites already.

  • Commented on November 9, 2016 at 3:17 pm


  • Commented on December 13, 2016 at 10:02 pm

    Now this is scary…

  • Commented on February 17, 2017 at 1:26 pm

    This was a great pasta. REALLY good narrative skills person!

  • F.M.Zillyons
    Commented on February 22, 2017 at 1:27 pm

    It’s just a crappypasta. Nothing creepy at all!

  • Commented on June 1, 2017 at 10:28 pm

    Although the “I…am…..god” twist was ridiculous, the story itself was really good and is very damn unsettling to read.

  • Commented on October 6, 2017 at 1:20 pm

    I think I’ve submitted this before!

  • jOSHNA
    Commented on November 8, 2017 at 6:51 am


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