The Portraits

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There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning.

As he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.

The next morning, the hunter awoke — he turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.

Original Author: Unknown

66 Comments on 'The Portraits'

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  • Commented on April 23, 2013 at 10:52 am

    Damn.. That was satisfying

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  • Commented on May 1, 2013 at 6:40 pm

    A classic and an All-time favourite of mine! =]

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  • Commented on May 17, 2013 at 6:12 am

    Now THIS is what you call a great pasta. 5/5 g

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  • Commented on June 10, 2013 at 8:16 pm

    Oh god

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  • Commented on June 10, 2013 at 8:35 pm

    Brilliant!

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  • Commented on August 3, 2013 at 1:06 pm

    this is beautifull

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  • Commented on August 3, 2013 at 5:53 pm

    I love it would enjoy seeing expanded

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  • Commented on August 15, 2013 at 3:04 am

    That was some tasty fucking pasta

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  • Commented on September 9, 2013 at 9:25 pm

    Wait so were there people staring in at him message me at. Chorrushigavin@gmail.com

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  • Commented on September 20, 2013 at 4:23 pm

    Oh dear god…

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  • Commented on October 17, 2013 at 3:48 pm

    I almost shit my pants

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  • Commented on October 28, 2013 at 9:02 am

    run.. run far away…

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  • Commented on October 29, 2013 at 4:16 pm

    DAMN SON. That’s the good shit. Bravo 🙂

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  • Commented on March 28, 2014 at 12:25 am

    Nice!

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  • Commented on May 16, 2014 at 9:53 am

    Interesting. 3/5

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  • Commented on September 17, 2014 at 4:07 pm

    That was very creepy well done.

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  • Someone
    Commented on November 10, 2014 at 5:31 pm

    I laughed at the end xD Nice creepypasta.

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  • Commented on December 10, 2014 at 5:00 am

    Nice.

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  • Commented on December 15, 2014 at 3:35 am

    One of my faves.

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  • Commented on December 31, 2014 at 6:16 pm

    i didnt see that coming 5/5

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  • Commented on February 24, 2015 at 5:28 pm

    This is a good one!

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  • Commented on March 6, 2015 at 7:24 pm

    I honestly feel you could’ve elaborated more…. it felt too quick but it was okay

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  • Commented on April 2, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    holy fuck

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  • Commented on April 20, 2015 at 11:05 pm

    It made me feel uneasy which is good. But I only had a small problem with it. Elaborate a bit. The idea was very creative and original. However if you don’t elaborate, it still sends a shiver down your spine. Nice work. Keep writing and keep being original.

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  • Commented on April 25, 2015 at 9:46 pm

    I totally though that the pictures would come alive but this turned out scarier that expected !
    5/5

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  • Commented on May 8, 2015 at 3:08 am

    Very impressive! It’s rare to come across a short pasta with this kind of impact. 5/5

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  • Commented on May 9, 2015 at 4:10 pm

    That ending made my stomach “jump.”

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  • Commented on May 27, 2015 at 4:11 am

    Not gonna lie, this will go well for when i go camping (evil internal laughter)

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  • Commented on June 19, 2015 at 2:22 am

    *fans self* Yes. I’m quite pleased.

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  • Commented on June 24, 2015 at 10:18 am

    Marvelously executed!

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  • Commented on July 23, 2015 at 8:14 pm

    Not where I thought it was going. I thought he was going to wake up and be in one of the portraits. This is better.

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  • Commented on July 30, 2015 at 6:15 pm

    Great twist! 5/5

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  • Commented on August 12, 2015 at 11:00 am

    thats one great pasta 500/5

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  • Commented on August 19, 2015 at 7:21 pm

    soooooo goooood. why can’t all short pastas be like this!!!! 5/5

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  • Commented on September 20, 2015 at 9:59 pm

    Wow, my curtains will be drawn from now on in…
    Creepy as hell!

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  • Commented on September 24, 2015 at 3:15 pm

    Creepy as. Just what the creep master ordered.

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  • Commented on October 2, 2015 at 9:50 am

    Ugh… I still have chills, and I’m sitting next to a huge window, kind of scared to look at it

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  • Commented on October 5, 2015 at 6:20 pm

    That was a great, satisfying story, especially how it was only made out in a few paragraphs. I loved how i couldn’t really predict an ending, then the last line just KO’ed me, sending chills down my body. 5/5. Great job.

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  • Commented on October 24, 2015 at 10:13 pm

    This is exactly what a Tinypasta should be. Perfect. 5/5

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  • Pinetree's Revenge
    Commented on October 29, 2015 at 8:10 pm

    A lot of people are saying this was a tasty pasta. I’m sure if I under stood what was happening I would be loving it also. I just don’t under stand whats happening. I’m really young so I might not need to know whats going on, but please can someone explain whats happening. I want to get scared.

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  • Commented on November 23, 2015 at 10:48 pm

    HOLY SHIT!

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  • Commented on December 18, 2015 at 12:38 am

    My friend told me this a few years ago and I nearly shit myself! Awesome story though. It was nice to see it’s still out there.

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  • Commented on March 14, 2016 at 10:14 pm

    Awesome im glad I live on the 2nd floor 100/100

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  • Commented on May 12, 2016 at 8:53 am

    That was really cool! I can only imagine what he must have felt in the morning…

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  • Commented on May 12, 2016 at 4:13 pm

    Damn. That was great. This story is what should set the standard for tiny pastas.

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  • Commented on May 12, 2016 at 4:40 pm

    Amazing 10/10

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  • Commented on May 12, 2016 at 4:45 pm

    Keep writing these mind**** stories.

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  • Commented on May 26, 2016 at 1:17 pm

    Beautifully written and wonderfully creepy.
    5/5.

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  • Commented on June 1, 2016 at 5:42 pm

    Just reminds me of a Foreigner song (Long, Long Way From Home)

    It was my destiny
    It’s what we needed to do
    They were telling me
    I’m telling you
    I was inside looking outside
    The millions of faces
    But still I’m alone
    Waiting, hours of waiting
    Paying a penance
    I was longing for home

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  • Commented on June 11, 2016 at 8:34 pm

    Well done, my good sir “Unknown”.

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  • Danae
    Commented on June 16, 2016 at 8:01 pm

    Holy shit. Chills.

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  • Commented on July 26, 2016 at 6:52 am

    This pasta was truly incredible and accomplished what few pastas could on this website. It gave a detailed story within a few paragraphs and packing quite the scare at the same time. The twist was somewhat unexpected, but still turned out great.

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  • Commented on September 16, 2016 at 10:56 pm

    Holy Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!! 🙂
    5/5 😀

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  • Commented on October 19, 2016 at 9:03 am

    I thought it was something like mona lisa. LOL. I like the concept though, sent chills.

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  • Commented on October 19, 2016 at 5:30 pm

    That was twisted. Good job. I like it.

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  • Commented on January 8, 2017 at 10:24 pm

    i remember going on a retreat with my friends and telling this story myself. Defo a classic for me. Loved it. 5/5! Love it! 😀

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  • Commented on February 4, 2017 at 9:39 pm

    That was scary!

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  • death
    Commented on March 16, 2017 at 3:47 pm

    900/10

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  • Commented on April 29, 2017 at 6:00 pm

    Wow. That was a solid short story! Well done

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  • Commented on May 1, 2017 at 12:43 am

    I think the hunter needs medical help

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  • Commented on October 25, 2017 at 7:43 pm

    Short, elegant, complete and disturbing.

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  • Me.
    Commented on January 1, 2018 at 6:34 pm

    Short and sweet pasta. 5/5.

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  • Commented on January 21, 2018 at 2:39 pm

    Nothing special…

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  • Commented on February 4, 2018 at 8:32 am

    Wicked to the power of Wicked!

    God Damn Wonderful

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  • Commented on February 4, 2018 at 7:39 pm

    WOW . . .

    No words, just WOW . . .

    Good Job! Keep up the good work! 10/10

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  • Commented on May 9, 2018 at 3:46 am

    Wow. Stalker Level:90000

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