There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning.
As he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.
The next morning, the hunter awoke — he turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.
66 Comments on 'The Portraits'
Damn.. That was satisfying
A classic and an All-time favourite of mine! =]
Now THIS is what you call a great pasta. 5/5 g
Oh god
Brilliant!
this is beautifull
I love it would enjoy seeing expanded
That was some tasty fucking pasta
Wait so were there people staring in at him message me at. Chorrushigavin@gmail.com
Oh dear god…
I almost shit my pants
run.. run far away…
DAMN SON. That’s the good shit. Bravo 🙂
Nice!
Interesting. 3/5
That was very creepy well done.
I laughed at the end xD Nice creepypasta.
Nice.
One of my faves.
i didnt see that coming 5/5
This is a good one!
I honestly feel you could’ve elaborated more…. it felt too quick but it was okay
holy fuck
It made me feel uneasy which is good. But I only had a small problem with it. Elaborate a bit. The idea was very creative and original. However if you don’t elaborate, it still sends a shiver down your spine. Nice work. Keep writing and keep being original.
I totally though that the pictures would come alive but this turned out scarier that expected !
5/5
Very impressive! It’s rare to come across a short pasta with this kind of impact. 5/5
That ending made my stomach “jump.”
Not gonna lie, this will go well for when i go camping (evil internal laughter)
*fans self* Yes. I’m quite pleased.
Marvelously executed!
Not where I thought it was going. I thought he was going to wake up and be in one of the portraits. This is better.
Great twist! 5/5
thats one great pasta 500/5
soooooo goooood. why can’t all short pastas be like this!!!! 5/5
Wow, my curtains will be drawn from now on in…
Creepy as hell!
Creepy as. Just what the creep master ordered.
Ugh… I still have chills, and I’m sitting next to a huge window, kind of scared to look at it
That was a great, satisfying story, especially how it was only made out in a few paragraphs. I loved how i couldn’t really predict an ending, then the last line just KO’ed me, sending chills down my body. 5/5. Great job.
This is exactly what a Tinypasta should be. Perfect. 5/5
A lot of people are saying this was a tasty pasta. I’m sure if I under stood what was happening I would be loving it also. I just don’t under stand whats happening. I’m really young so I might not need to know whats going on, but please can someone explain whats happening. I want to get scared.
HOLY SHIT!
My friend told me this a few years ago and I nearly shit myself! Awesome story though. It was nice to see it’s still out there.
Awesome im glad I live on the 2nd floor 100/100
That was really cool! I can only imagine what he must have felt in the morning…
Damn. That was great. This story is what should set the standard for tiny pastas.
Amazing 10/10
Keep writing these mind**** stories.
Beautifully written and wonderfully creepy.
5/5.
Just reminds me of a Foreigner song (Long, Long Way From Home)
It was my destiny
It’s what we needed to do
They were telling me
I’m telling you
I was inside looking outside
The millions of faces
But still I’m alone
Waiting, hours of waiting
Paying a penance
I was longing for home
Well done, my good sir “Unknown”.
Holy shit. Chills.
This pasta was truly incredible and accomplished what few pastas could on this website. It gave a detailed story within a few paragraphs and packing quite the scare at the same time. The twist was somewhat unexpected, but still turned out great.
Holy Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!!!!! 🙂
5/5 😀
I thought it was something like mona lisa. LOL. I like the concept though, sent chills.
That was twisted. Good job. I like it.
i remember going on a retreat with my friends and telling this story myself. Defo a classic for me. Loved it. 5/5! Love it! 😀
That was scary!
900/10
Wow. That was a solid short story! Well done
I think the hunter needs medical help
Short, elegant, complete and disturbing.
Short and sweet pasta. 5/5.
Nothing special…
Wicked to the power of Wicked!
God Damn Wonderful
WOW . . .
No words, just WOW . . .
Good Job! Keep up the good work! 10/10
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