Weird Kid
by Robby Lumbard
My cousin got me into reading the stories on this site a few months ago so I figured this would be the place to tell this crazy shit. I don’t guess it lives up to “Abandoned by Disney” or some of the other really bizarre ones on here but my story’s true so maybe that earns it some extra points.
For you to completely understand the creepy level of what I’m about to write, you’ve got to know a little about the weird kid from the title. You probably all had somebody like him in your school. He was a year behind me and my friend, Garret, and the kind of kid that made you want to punch him in the face just for being so strange. I felt it sometimes and I’m not really even a violent guy. So anyway, this goofy looking, awkward son of a bitch is always by himself at school, reading something and not even trying to be normal. He’d dress out for gym but then just sit on the bleachers and mumble like a moron if Coach Brown tried to get him to participate. I only tried to talk to him one time and got the same retarded, mumbling response. All I did was ask him why he acted like such a loser and he gets tears in his eyes and turns into a stuttering idiot.
So anyway, I, like everybody else, was annoyed by the kid. Garret, on the other hand, couldn’t fucking stand him. He would always trip the little weirdo when he was walking in the hall or try to embarrass him in front of everyone. Garret’s always been a good friend but he’s not exactly known for being the nicest guy in the world. I think Garret sort of felt like he was helping the kid though. Maybe he thought if “Dickless” (that’s what Garret usually called him) realized how stupid he looked to all the other kids in school, he’d make some effort to be normal.
Whatever the reason, Garret loved torturing the kid but didn’t really get violent with things until this year. Garret and I are Juniors and and I think we both started to feel the senioritis thing early. In stead of tripping him, Garret started walking up to the kid and bitch slapping him in between classes. Most people laughed but some, myself included, to be honest, thought it was a little harsh. The closet thing was funny and seemed pretty harmless, though.
Before homeroom every morning, all the students had to stand outside and wait for the first bell to ring before we could go to class. A really dumb idea, by the way. So anyway, Garret decided at some point that he couldn’t stand seeing the weird kid standing outside with everyone else and starts making him stand in this little supply closet on the side of the school. It wasn’t like Garret even had to force the kid in or anything. I always assumed he was probably happier being by himself, truthfully.
The closet routine happened for months until about a week ago. Garret goes to put the kid in his spot that morning and this is where things took a turn onto Creepy Street. The kid didn’t start walking when Garret told him to and looked Garret right in the eyes with this psycho glare. Garret just starting laughing, but, before anyone knows it, the kid reaches out and scratches the shit out of Garret’s face. I heard later that somebody noticed the little lunatic’s fingernails had been filed to points but I don’t know if that’s true. All I know is that the scratch on Garret’s face was deep and there was blood dripping from his face like I’ve never seen from any fight. Garret was shocked but jumped on top of the kid and started beating the hell out of him. The kid’s face was probably just about as bloody as Garret’s by the time a teacher broke things up. Both Garret and the kid were suspended and, though everyone was surprised at what happened, we all thought that was that. Then the really crazy shit came out.
Our principal started looking into what happened and, of course, some narc freshman told her about how Garret had the kid stand in the closet every morning. When the principal looked in there, she found where the crazy son of a bitch had written all kinds of serial killer shit on the side of a bookcase. There weren’t full sentences and it just said really creepy stuff like “skin them alive” and “taste your blood.” There was also a piece of metal from a rolling tv stand that the kid had sharpened. I guess he was a cutter because it already had blood all over it. There’s a stupid rumor going around that the kid used the knife he made to cut out his tongue, but that’s just people trying to make an already weird story even weirder.
Alright, that’s what happened. I know it doesn’t have some really dramatic ending but I thought it met the creepy requirement to post it here. I’m more jealous of Garret than anything. He’s got the kind of parents that don’t care about him being suspended so he’s basically just got his days free to play video games or drive around or whatever. I spoke to him this morning and he was planning to go to the kid’s house and either apologize or give him more shit. I don’t think Garret was sure yet. Either way, I’ll update this when I talk to
robby cant finish his story
hes lost a lot of blood and his hands arent going to work anymore
51 Comments on 'Weird Kid'
damn
Holy shit, I was more amused then scared until the part when Robby is murdered brutally by the weird kid. That made my stomach fucking drop.
I reviewed this one a while back. I must say, the beginning made me cringe. I really don’t like when people mention other creepy pastas in their own pasta. However, the rest of the story was pretty good! You really got across how weird this kid actually is, and you know there is something wrong with him through the whole story. The twist at the end was fantastic!!!
I like the reality ones even if they aren’t true. The fact that it COULD be gives it creep points
This Pasta was fricking amazing man. Nice work, keep writing!
not a true story, sir
niiiiiiiice story bru
bro I’ve read this on the internet since the beginning of creepypastas
Writing this almost as if it were real life is what has crept me out when I read it.
Hehehe…I did something like this to some kids in my school…I decorated there lockers in bloody operator notes and drew eyes wherever I knew they were going to be… I think I succeeded in creepy them out.
sorry not scary at all bro
Pretty good story
Even though this doesn’t seem real at all, asking the ” weird kid” why he’s a loser tells me who the real loser is. Kids like that usually just dont know how to be social, they need people to be friendly to them. Anyway I didn’t like the level of mean ness in the story
this story is pretty good. who ever made this just keep on writting your scary stories
The weird kid at my elementary school (it was is 4th grade) was this know-it-all nerd that out of nowhere after we went to gym that my class was gonna go to our homeroom, he said “does anyone here have a knive so I can kill Landon?” At the time, this kid Landon was the popular type of boy. But he would never say or do anything violent unless you were the first to say something about him. The other kid, Charlie, was given a report and I ended finding out that he always thought about killing people and one of the people that he wanted dead was me….. just for saying that he shouldn’t be mocking everyone for no goddamn reason… now that I think about it, he must be in a psychologist.
I liked it more than I liked Ticci Tobi.
Grammar was also good (I’m sort of a grammar fanatic).
Even though I only felt a slight creepiness creeping in there on the last line, it was nice and simple; like marmite, one loves or hates it – I was more entertained in the hopes that Garret would get butchered.
Its not a true story, but its a good one all the same… The aspect its written in is about the scariest part
The only thing that scares me about this story is what the writer’s sense of normal and weird seems skewed. The weirdo reads books at school! My god, the horror! The horror!!!
I enjoyed this story very much because I feel as if many people are able to relate to this story through the different characters portrayed, whether they relate to Garret(the bully), Robby (the bystander), the freshman (the person who “tattles”), or especially the kid (who Robby doesn’t seem to identify except Garret calling him “Dickless”).
The end of the story also really leaves you hanging, which I normally don’t enjoy but in this situation it leaves the mind to wonder and to be able to imagine different scenarios.
I think you did a great job creating this story, good job.
Pretty good. It didn’t scare me but it’s written well for a creepy pasta. Keep up the good work.
Not the best
Although not a cliché or guts and gore or edgy, by the least it has a hint of reality to it which makes me like the story a lot really. It’s interesting as the weird kid IS the victim in my point of view, instead of the traditional protagonists gets threatened/bullied/etc.. It really brings reality and catches the readers attention…well mine at least. Keep up the good work!
damn this is some good shit right here great job
I liked this story I just don’t like the ending but it was good
interesting but not true. to be honest I would have bullied the kid too XD.
It does not scare much more it was cool to read
Good for you kiddo. Kill em all. They think people like you are weak. Show them They are wrong.
Weird kid reminds me of myself
Surprisingly not too bad. Title’s good and the story feels relatively realistic. Of course the ending’s the best part
Hey,I reviewed this story!Really great story,feels like something real,when I first red this my heart sunk.Great one!
Well to be honest, it isn’t scary like a creepypasta should be and I didn’t like that Garret dude messing the kid up. There’s just people like that. Why didn’t you people just left him alone. Now the twisted part that I like the most is when that kid clawed Garret’s face. Garret definitely deserved that.
First things first, I really liked the pasta. It was chilling, and interesting. The fact that it lacked supernatural elements made it, for me, much more disturbing. The whole plot was not terribly original, but it was finely executed which made it worth reading.
I should note, however, that there was a minute, but very important, problem in your plot. A twist is supposed to give the reader shocking new information, often accompanied with sudden changes in form to further accent the shock. In your story, the twist doesn’t really add much of to the story. We already know what the “weird kid” is capable of, so the last line is not much of a news to us. This is something that should be fairly easy to fix through the writer’s imagination: Either add something new to the story (Which it might or might not need… I think the story already has enough elements, but it also could handle something small added to it.), or rearrange the existing parts so that the twist actually *does* deliver new information.
In the end, I’d like to point out one thing though. As a former bullied weird kid, I found the narrator’s view in the starting paragraphs plain cruel, and stupid. Of course, in a way, that adds to the value of the work, since it seems to be how many bullies think. So, all in all, keep up the good work!
Amazing story!
When’s your next creepypasta coming, because you are amazing!
It’s sad that we can all relate to this story on some level, R.I.P. Gayvin
I like how the bullies got theirs but I still don’t like the way the narrarator seems to condone the evil acts of his friend. If you made him more sympathetic I would of maybe gave a shit at his demise in the end
Basically your just a frickin bully. Why hate somebody because they are different? The most scary image from this story is you snickerin and egging on your bully friend as he harrases this poor kid. poor show.
Wow, dat weird kid was weird. I wasn’t really scared until the end, that made meh stomach drop like I had put a boulder in it. Other then dat, it was okay :/
Wow. Poor kid. Still a crazy person but, poor kid.
To be honest I actually thought the ending was funny.. Great story, though
Good story. We all had that one kid in class that was just weird. I’ve always wondered if kids like that turn sadistic because of the torture they went through. Therapy for all. Woo Hoo.
It was great it was close to reality was very psychotic keep up the good work!!
Well, the kid really needs some counseling. Nonetheless, what your friend did was bullying. If I were to stand in that kid’s shoes, I would have done something bad to him too. maybe a broken bone or two. the point is, if you want to bully someone, you should suffer from consequences. the kid didn’t even do something bad to you guys so why make fun of him. that is if the story is real.
I am the weird kid at school
Not to be rude, but what the hell? This kid is “creepy” because he reads books and prefers to be alone, and after being bitchslapped, tripped, name called, forced to stand in a closet for who knows how long, it’s no suprise at the end at all. And that little twist has no build up, it just happens and therefore doesn’t work. The scariest thing in this story is the blantent and almost condoned bullying of this kid.
not for me..
Isnt the point to not be real but seem as If it were?
The narrator’s crappy personality is the part that makes the story seem more realistic. People in the comments are up in arms about it, but that’s part of storytelling: perspective. Not a bad pasta, all things considered. Just not poo your pants scary 4/5
HOT DAMN
I’m confused, was it Garrett in the very end or the “weird kid”?
UGH THAT ENDING IS FUCKING CREEPY!