White with Red

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A man went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. She explained that it was a storeroom, and that it was out of bounds. She reminded him of this several times before allowing him upstairs. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed. However the insistence of the woman had piqued his curiosity, so the next night he walked down the hall to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye.

What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was incredibly pale. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while, was this a celebrity? The owners daughter? He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to. As he was still looking, the woman turned sharply and he jumped back from the door, hoping she would not suspect he had been spying on her. He crept away from the door and walked back to his room. The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out besides a distinct red color, unmoving. Perhaps the inhabitants of the room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red. He felt embarrassed that he had made the woman so uncomfortable, and hoped she had not made a complaint with the woman on the front desk.

At this point he decided to consult her for more information. After some gentle quizzing and the promise that the explanation would go no further than him she finally said “Well, I might as well tell you the story of what happened in that room. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in there, we find that even now, people get uncomfortable staying there. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which were red.”

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25 Comments on 'White with Red'

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  • Commented on May 13, 2013 at 7:11 pm

    Hey…I’ve read this before! Unless this is the author of the book I read this in, this is copied.

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  • Commented on April 21, 2013 at 6:45 pm

    The first time I read the ending to this, I could feel all the hairs on my body stand on end. I love this – the imagery is just so creepy.

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  • Commented on April 24, 2013 at 5:54 pm

    Same. When I first read this, I flipped out. This sent a shiver down my spine. It’s amazing and I love
    Showing this to people for the first time to see their reaction.

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  • Commented on April 28, 2013 at 9:11 pm

    This is definitely right up there with my all-time favourites; no matter how many times I reread, that ending never gets old. A must-read for all creepypasta lovers.

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  • Commented on May 1, 2013 at 2:53 am

    One of my favorites creepypastas. The ending really gets to you the first time you read it =]

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  • Commented on May 29, 2013 at 1:20 pm

    Good god… 9/10 Tastiness

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  • Commented on May 29, 2013 at 7:02 pm

    Great pasta indeed! May I have some more? ^^

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  • Commented on May 30, 2013 at 11:08 pm

    Delicious

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  • Commented on June 5, 2013 at 6:01 am

    The end made my skin crawl. Creepy pasta worthy.

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  • Commented on June 15, 2013 at 3:26 pm

    oh? i dont seem to understand

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  • Commented on June 18, 2013 at 2:14 pm

    It’s not as creepy if your the one in the room, like me

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  • Commented on August 1, 2013 at 1:24 am

    Made my skin crawl as I read the ending please write another

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  • Commented on August 3, 2013 at 1:19 pm

    Best thing i ever read

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  • Commented on August 13, 2013 at 1:36 pm

    Talk about staring someone down

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  • Commented on November 18, 2013 at 12:27 am

    That was truly amazing!
    Tasty enough to make me full for one night… its like a prorogue… lol

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  • Commented on December 19, 2013 at 11:41 pm

    I think i shit myself

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  • Commented on December 20, 2013 at 9:33 pm

    lol it took me a while to get it! that was impressive!

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  • Commented on January 5, 2014 at 7:10 am

    one of them ones when your brain gets away from you like “nah it cant be that….”
    so you read faster to block the voice and because of the surmounting excitement/dread if youre correct

    corr blimey.

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  • Commented on March 28, 2014 at 6:36 pm

    Ive heard this story many times when I was a child. I just think there needs to be an explanation of why the people are all white and have red eyes.

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  • Commented on April 16, 2014 at 11:07 pm

    The explanation as to why their eyes are red and their skin is white speer105 it that they are albino. I am albino so I understood this perfectly amazing story very creepy

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  • Commented on April 16, 2014 at 11:08 pm

    The explanation as to why their eyes are red and their skin is white speer105 it that they are albino. I am albino so I understood this perfectly amazing story.

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  • Commented on July 31, 2014 at 9:38 am

    I think I just shit my pants…

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  • Commented on August 2, 2014 at 4:05 pm

    I was absolutely not satisfied with the ending at first. I literally slapped myself in the face when I realized what the red thing was. Oh god. Oh my goodness, amazing. Absolutely tasty. 100/10.

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  • Snowthorn
    Commented on November 1, 2014 at 12:59 pm

    idk when I read the end of the story all I thought of was Vincent Valentine, pale skin and red eyes… beautiful if you ask me.

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  • Commented on November 21, 2014 at 4:59 am

    Best pasta EVER! yum yum!

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