Who’s in my Bed?

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I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “Daddy check for monsters under my bed.” I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, “Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.”

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57 Comments on 'Who’s in my Bed?'

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  • Commented on September 24, 2014 at 8:02 pm

    Then i remembered, I had twins, and whopped their ass. lol.

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  • Commented on October 13, 2013 at 4:07 am

    My favorite pastas are the ones that are short, but pack a punch. I enjoyed this one!

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  • Commented on November 14, 2014 at 2:27 am

    Simplicity in horror is a true challenge. Always liked this one.

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  • Commented on November 1, 2013 at 5:07 pm

    poor little monster…

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  • Abby Kea
    Commented on May 20, 2015 at 3:37 pm

    omg… i think im starting to become OBSESSED with creepypastas!!!!!!!

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  • Commented on December 9, 2015 at 7:39 pm

    It’s not like I was gonna sleep tonight.

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  • QA
    Commented on June 2, 2015 at 7:35 pm

    And when you look up it’s a fucking demon ready to bite your head off.

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  • Commented on October 7, 2013 at 11:45 pm

    I wrote and submitted a story just like this, only mine was longer. I think it got rejected, but whatever, I like this one better.

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  • Commented on October 7, 2013 at 9:19 pm

    Hmmmmm. TASTY!
    This pasta is perfect. Very short but puchs one hell of a punch. I just love pastas like this =]

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  • Commented on October 9, 2013 at 11:30 pm

    O___O Omg that was lovely. Short yet satisfying.

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  • Commented on November 1, 2013 at 5:09 pm

    oh, I just realized, this came out a day before my birthday! thank you for the unintentional birthday present!

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  • Commented on February 27, 2015 at 7:20 am

    kinder-doppelganger… In a lot of legends, one will die if they see each other. you people most likely already knew that… watch out for yourself. you are your own worst enemy.

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  • Commented on August 24, 2014 at 12:11 am

    *claps* awesome <3

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  • Commented on November 19, 2015 at 9:26 am

    read it like thousand of tiimes
    gr8

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  • Commented on November 30, 2015 at 11:21 pm

    I always enjoy this one! Short but packs a creepy punch 🙂

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  • Commented on September 30, 2016 at 5:28 pm

    And then the wife comes in and says “SURPRISE WE HAD TWINS”

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  • Commented on October 19, 2013 at 1:27 am

    Ok I had to read it a few times to understand it the person on the bed isn’t the little boy

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  • Commented on September 10, 2014 at 2:38 pm

    This is one of my favorite pastas.

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  • Commented on April 8, 2015 at 11:00 pm

    The best pastas are always the tiny ones.

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  • Commented on June 24, 2015 at 9:54 pm

    Interesting doppleganger idea. What if a doppleganger is just the anti-you, like protons have anti-protons. If they make contact, they both destroy each other from existence. What if the same happens with dopplegangers?

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  • Commented on September 26, 2015 at 2:41 pm

    Great short pasta, extremely enjoyable.

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  • Commented on November 4, 2015 at 4:26 pm

    Well that was interesting, yet so good!!! it was great short and keeps you entertained. 5/5 even if it is so short

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  • Commented on January 6, 2016 at 11:48 pm

    Is it odd that I sleep during the day instead of at night??

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  • David
    Commented on January 10, 2016 at 5:07 pm

    This one is super creepy cause you don’t know which is the monster …

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  • Commented on March 16, 2016 at 5:25 pm

    WHAT!!!! There’s two of them?!? :O

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  • Commented on April 7, 2016 at 11:34 am

    oh…well…..we’ll need to have a bloody talk about who is who here…. FIRST TO DIE IS THE REAL ONE

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  • Commented on January 24, 2017 at 5:20 pm

    I would scared for near death if something like that happen to me

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  • Commented on April 5, 2017 at 4:09 am

    As someone who struggles to enjoy lengthy pastas, I really appreciate short ones that capture the essence in just a few words.

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  • Commented on April 29, 2017 at 7:38 pm

    short and awesome

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  • Commented on July 22, 2017 at 12:47 am

    Woah, freaky
    4/5

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  • Commented on October 8, 2013 at 12:23 pm

    I would have liked to read it cedarlj.

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  • Commented on October 15, 2013 at 10:11 pm

    So simple yet so perfect good job

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  • Commented on December 16, 2013 at 1:49 am

    This pasta had an amazing punch for such a short recipe. 🙂

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  • Commented on July 16, 2014 at 8:28 am

    whoa. i expected him to say something different. this is great. short and to the point. (:

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  • Commented on February 10, 2015 at 5:41 pm

    Fabulous

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  • Commented on April 20, 2015 at 8:46 pm

    Now this is a creepypasta.

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  • Commented on August 4, 2015 at 5:23 am

    awesome!!!!!!!

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  • Commented on September 4, 2015 at 3:05 pm

    it’s a good pasta. this one and tag are my favorites
    so far.

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  • Commented on September 27, 2015 at 11:03 am

    Good, but as I said before enough with the under the bed, how old are we. Besides I have cut the legs off mine.

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  • Commented on October 20, 2015 at 5:51 pm

    omg……tht was amazing

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  • Commented on March 1, 2016 at 8:39 am

    I really like this one

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  • Commented on April 2, 2016 at 10:04 am

    One of my favs ^^

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  • Commented on May 18, 2016 at 6:01 pm

    I saw this on facebook.

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  • Commented on August 18, 2016 at 6:26 am

    Spooks

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  • Commented on September 8, 2016 at 1:51 am

    Das Some Gud Pasta friend

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  • Commented on September 19, 2016 at 12:21 am

    Is there any way to favorite pastas? I loved this one n I wanna save it 🙁

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  • Commented on September 27, 2016 at 4:25 pm

    I liked this story a lot it was really good i didn’t expect that at all

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  • Commented on November 15, 2016 at 5:38 am

    My new favorite!!!!

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  • Reggie Bush
    Commented on December 20, 2016 at 7:34 pm

    The real one is the _______

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  • Commented on December 29, 2016 at 7:58 am

    Yes, they’re twins

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  • Commented on January 6, 2017 at 7:28 pm

    Omg they are twins.lol can’t believe that happened. I give 10/10 it’s amazing. I’m wondering what will happen to the kid under the bed.

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  • Commented on February 27, 2017 at 9:27 pm

    i can not believe that simple 5 lines can be this creepy .. nice job

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  • Commented on October 14, 2017 at 2:39 am

    Not creepy due to many spelling and grammar errors. 1/10. I do however challenge someone to make a story off of this submission and improve upon it or for the original author to do this themselves. It is always interesting for an author to update a story they wrote long ago. It is equally as interesting to see another writer twist it their own way.

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  • Commented on November 15, 2016 at 7:26 am

    Nice. Short but creepy, but maybe more on the children?

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  • Commented on April 3, 2014 at 11:23 am

    3/5 good, but unoriginal

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  • Python
    Commented on January 28, 2015 at 8:29 pm

    Look up this video called tap light dub by jabody dubs funny as shit

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  • Commented on October 8, 2013 at 1:53 am

    Oh.

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