I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, “Daddy check for monsters under my bed.” I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, “Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.”
Who’s in my Bed?
58 Comments on 'Who’s in my Bed?'
This pasta is perfect. Very short but puchs one hell of a punch. I just love pastas like this =]
I wrote and submitted a story just like this, only mine was longer. I think it got rejected, but whatever, I like this one better.
I would have liked to read it cedarlj.
O___O Omg that was lovely. Short yet satisfying.
My favorite pastas are the ones that are short, but pack a punch. I enjoyed this one!
So simple yet so perfect good job
Ok I had to read it a few times to understand it the person on the bed isn’t the little boy
poor little monster…
oh, I just realized, this came out a day before my birthday! thank you for the unintentional birthday present!
This pasta had an amazing punch for such a short recipe. 🙂
3/5 good, but unoriginal
whoa. i expected him to say something different. this is great. short and to the point. (:
*claps* awesome <3
This is one of my favorite pastas.
Then i remembered, I had twins, and whopped their ass. lol.
Simplicity in horror is a true challenge. Always liked this one.
Look up this video called tap light dub by jabody dubs funny as shit
kinder-doppelganger… In a lot of legends, one will die if they see each other. you people most likely already knew that… watch out for yourself. you are your own worst enemy.
The best pastas are always the tiny ones.
Now this is a creepypasta.
omg… i think im starting to become OBSESSED with creepypastas!!!!!!!
And when you look up it’s a fucking demon ready to bite your head off.
Interesting doppleganger idea. What if a doppleganger is just the anti-you, like protons have anti-protons. If they make contact, they both destroy each other from existence. What if the same happens with dopplegangers?
it’s a good pasta. this one and tag are my favorites
Great short pasta, extremely enjoyable.
Good, but as I said before enough with the under the bed, how old are we. Besides I have cut the legs off mine.
omg……tht was amazing
Well that was interesting, yet so good!!! it was great short and keeps you entertained. 5/5 even if it is so short
read it like thousand of tiimes
I always enjoy this one! Short but packs a creepy punch 🙂
It’s not like I was gonna sleep tonight.
Is it odd that I sleep during the day instead of at night??
This one is super creepy cause you don’t know which is the monster …
I really like this one
WHAT!!!! There’s two of them?!? :O
One of my favs ^^
oh…well…..we’ll need to have a bloody talk about who is who here…. FIRST TO DIE IS THE REAL ONE
I saw this on facebook.
Das Some Gud Pasta friend
Is there any way to favorite pastas? I loved this one n I wanna save it 🙁
I liked this story a lot it was really good i didn’t expect that at all
And then the wife comes in and says “SURPRISE WE HAD TWINS”
My new favorite!!!!
Nice. Short but creepy, but maybe more on the children?
The real one is the _______
Yes, they’re twins
Omg they are twins.lol can’t believe that happened. I give 10/10 it’s amazing. I’m wondering what will happen to the kid under the bed.
I would scared for near death if something like that happen to me
i can not believe that simple 5 lines can be this creepy .. nice job
As someone who struggles to enjoy lengthy pastas, I really appreciate short ones that capture the essence in just a few words.
short and awesome
Not creepy due to many spelling and grammar errors. 1/10. I do however challenge someone to make a story off of this submission and improve upon it or for the original author to do this themselves. It is always interesting for an author to update a story they wrote long ago. It is equally as interesting to see another writer twist it their own way.