It matters not which religion you claim to be, “God” has abandoned us.
Without the threat of being sent to Hell, or being judged by the almighty creator, humanity has become chaos at its worst. No rules guide us through life. Nothing can stop the rampages and murders, the robberies and crimes of all natures. The only thing that can stop it now is the return of the “One true God”. Without “Him”, humanity will cease to exist.
As it stands now, the entire human population is… well, it’s not human. They’re monsters, and those monsters who aren’t out killing, are committing other crimes and trying to repopulate.
It’s chilling really. The monsters we tried so hard to hide, to keep buried deep inside, have been unleashed. No one cares anymore about who they were. They care only to satisfy their cravings.
The bodies have begun to form the true image of a beast. Sunken eyes, pale skin… it’s grotesque. No longer is there diversity, no human qualities remain, and no way to tell them apart… aside from the sins they have chosen to commit.
I feel as if I am the only one who keeps the monster locked away anymore. I walk around, watching as the monsters do as they please. I’m surprised I have yet to be attacked, given I am the last human on Earth… But then again, maybe… just maybe… I’m the new god. Maybe, I was the one picked to lead the monsters…
The thought excites me as I shove my pale hands into my pockets, a smirk on my face and I head home. I unveil the mirror I had kept covered since the beginning of this mess, and instantly, I am in love with what I see…
My skin is a perfect shade of pale white and my eyes… My beautiful red eyes… They see the power. They see what I have become…
Yes. I am no monster ruled by the cravings of sin…
I. Am. God.
34 Comments on 'Sins of Humanity'
No your not there has never been one.lol
I like….intriguing.
It is very interesting it describes this hell of a world we live in perfectly. With a self obsession for himself he thinks he is clean of sins so he he is pure so he is god.
Loved it!
Different, I liked it. I guess I want more meat in this pasta.
This pasta makes me wonder, has there ever been a god? I live with a family of Christians but I had realised not long ago that I am not a Christian. I don’t believe in that God and Devil crap. But there was always that moment I would ask for help from them. It is ridiculous to think that I still would do that but I have always hoped that maybe, just maybe, there was one. But I have realized after reading this story, that there isn’t. There is no perfect world ever going to happen. Nobody is up there watching down over us. Just us monsters like the story said, sinning away like we didn’t have a care in the world.
Or he’s a delusional serial killer.
This seems like a clear answer, but it seems no one thought of it before now.
Schrödinger’s cat
Really whats with all the story with I’m god or god has died. Really people making fun of the creator of the universe is not real nice.
Well done Tiny just like I like then xD
[spoiler][/spoiler It seems like instead of being God he would be the Devil instead. ] Although for this that makes sense… It’s good!
I didn’t find a grammar error, so keep writing pastas.
It is like Animal Farm. U get to the end and realize thou art god. After all if it is Satan at the end, he is the only one in the trenches with brutal honesty I think this tale says so much with out getting too preachy.
I love this. The ending reminds me of something Lucifer (aka Satan) would say. Five stars !!
When I read this it made me wonder what if god is just an everyday guy. Heck he can be you or me or anyone else for that matter. The thought of this really interests me. I have to tell ya. This is one of the best small creepypastas I have read properly
Anyone else smile after reading these pastas?? I know they’re supposed to creep you out but……,maybe I’m just weird…
i never belived in devil nor god i belive in the evelution
WHY THE F*** DID HE HAVE RED EYES AND THINK HE IS GOD X0
Wow, that is a really different point of view, this was awesome. Keep writing!
“It matters not which religion you claim to be, “God” has abandoned us” these things break the immersion for me. Not everybody has a single god in their religion so it’s always so Christian focused.
Like if you want it to be that way it’s fine but have a little more originality and forethought otherwise it’s just a bit lazy.
Not to mention i’ve seen these kind of stories a million times one way or another.
@Keeplungart your not the only one
NOBODY else realises that he is committing Vanity? A Sin.
Well I can guess his satan.
it creepy but not enough 4/5
I hate stories like this. This just encourages people to go on with their sinful lives without caring about anybody other then yourself. I have this gut feeling that there is a god and we are living in the sign of the times right now. I don’t care if anyone calls me an idiot or delusional.
see at the back of your vagina
My tastebuds don’t like me. This pasta sounds like one of the shitty Jeff the killer rip off OCs. it didn’t go very far, and the big reveal sounded rushed, and the pale skin and red eyes are so extremely cliche that I… I can’t even explain my disgust. 2/5. Would not recommend this pasta.
This really describes how humans are absolute disgusting monsters that are killing everything, and calling every animal that tries to attack them “Evil” when in reality, we are the evil ones! I also love the ending, the character is god because he/she is the last one on earth!
Please write more creepypastas like these; they really inspire others and give us a different view on everything. This one made me think that humans are the monsters, and not the organisms that hurt or kill us!
The ending kinda reminds me of the creepypasta SONIC.EXE; it involves a pale face and red eyes. It also says “I AM GOD”.
This absolutely screams lonely emo kid. You. Need. Friends.
And. A. Shower.
Hmm. Really interesting.
He thinks he’s God while he’s just as much a monster as everyone else. And the sad part is, this refers to our own community as well.
this reminds me of death note
This is honestly a decent pasta.